D I D Y O U N O T I C E ???
On page 44 in Warriors Into the Wild the book says Blusetar instead of Blustar!
On page 20 in Into the Wild, it says Bluestar is a queen but nobody knows yet. Spoiler alert!!! *WEeEeE WoOoO ect.*
On the Power of Three family Tree it says Sorreltail and Brackenfur had kits, but where there kids are in the Family Tree it says they had Hazelkit but she died,but really they had Molekit and he died.
On page 15 it says it's Graypaw's first night as an apprentice, but it seems wrid because you would think they wouldn't send a young apprentice out on it's first night. Also Graypaw was ahead of Bluestar and Lionheart.
On page 45 it says Tigerclaw's ears was split in a deep vee shape. It should be V not vee.
On page 64 Firepaw asked Graypaw if he has ever been to a Gathering. Earlier in the book it says it's Graypaw's first night out as an apprentice. That was about 2 nights ago.
Tigerclaw says that loners are selfish...he appears to hate them, so why later does he mate with Sasha
Ravenpaw and Dustpaw's parents are never metioned, not only that, their colors don't fit in. I always thought Dustpaw and Sandpaw were brother and sister, just by the way they act toward one another. (Although some people think they liked each other....I didn't see that at all) Also, alot of fans believed Ravenpaw was Goldenflower's kit. I have a few issues with this, 1 she wouldn't have let Tigerclaw push him around then (since she was his mate) 2 The official site's family trees tell us no one is Ravenpaw's parents and 3, when Ravenpaw "dies" goldenflower doesn't seem to care at all
page 44 last paragraph, Bluestar is called Blusetar! whoops!
on page 141 they call Graypaw (or Greypaw if your in the UK) Grewpaw! wow! thats a big mess up! this was noticed by some visitors to my site, thank you so much!
When Rusty met Graypaw, Graypaw said it was his first night as an apprentice. How would he know the territory that well, and since when does the Clan allow for apprentices wandering off in the middle of the night
At the start of chapter two on page 20 it calls Bluestar a queen. Readers have no idea that she even has kits yet.
On page 45, paragraph 2, last sentence, "One of his (Tigerclaw) ears was split into a deep VEE shape" It should be V shape, not VEE
Bluestar looses a life from the rat attack, When firepaw asked if she was dead, tigerclaw said shes in the HANDS of starclan now, cats have paws not hands!
On Page 181, "Firepaw followed a few paces behind Graypaw, but Ravenpaw was flagging." It should be "lagging" Since when do cats flag?
Darkstripe is given Dustpaw to train after Redtail dies it says it's his FIRST apprentice but in Fire and Ice when Longtail gets his first apprentice it says he he was Darkstripe's apprentice.
Redtail was killed after a battle with RiverClan and we see Ravenpaw, Tigerclaw, and Redtail (dead) return to the camp yet there aren't any other warriors seen coming back, and no other warriors are noted to be injured and no one says anything about it till Ravenpaw shows up. Surely there'd have been more warriors.
Blackclaw of RiverClan is senior warrior when Rusty joins ThunderClan, but he's still a warrior in Power of Three even after his apprentice, Heavystep, became an elder!
Fire and Ice:
on page 15 in Fire and Ice, it calls Fireheart, Firepaw.
In Fire and Ice, when Cinderpaw says "Oh! I remember the scent from the kits that were stolen from Brokenstar." Well, she was one of the kits, so how does she remember it? Maybe she remembers it off herself.
It repeats a line but changes it by one word when it repeats it: Page 12, "Redtail had been the ThunderClan deputy before Tigerclaw. Fireheart had never met him, but he knew Redtail had been deeply respected by all the Clan." - Page 18, "Redtail had been the ThunderClan deputy before Lionheart. Fireheart had never met him, but he knew Redtail had been deeply respected by all the Clan."
When Thornclaw and Brightheart are apprenticed Bluestar says Frostfur feels her other kits are ready. But isn't it a bit strange that Thornpaw, Brightpaw, Cinderpaw, and brackenpaw are all from the same liter but apprenticed at differant times.
Blackclaw, a warrior of RiverClan doesn't age! Isn't it strange how he is still alive and a warrior when his apprentice, Heavystep, is made senior in the POT series? and how Shadepaw, one of his other apprentices was one of the elders who stayed behind? In Long Shadows he is still listed as a Warrior!
Forest of Secrets:
Fireheart is at a gathering and he is listening to elders and it mentions that one of the elders names was Crowfur but there was no Crowfur ever on the lists and he is never mentioned again!
In the allegiances it calls Cinderpaw, CinderPELT but she doesn't have the name Cinderpelt yet.
Bluestar is admiting to Fireheart that she had kits. "He (Mosskit) died with me by the river," she had said. But Mosskit is female!
A RiverClan queen is fussing over Silverstream at a Gathering because she is worried that Silverstream won't be able to make it back to camp since she pregnant. Silverstream calls the queen Greenflower, but there is no Greenflower ever mentioned any where else or in the Allegiances!
Rising Storm:
On page 29 it calls Cinderpelt, Cinderpaw!
on page 120 of Rising Storm it says "Sandstorm came dashing over to greet them with the good news. "Willowpelt had two she-cats and a tom!" That would be Sorreltail, Rainwhisker and Sootfur, 2 of them are toms!
On page 156 of rising storm, it says, Over the next few days, the streams in thunderClan territory dwindled until the only freshwater to be found was near the RiverClan border, on the far side of Sunningrocks. "There's never been a summer like it," Grumbled One-eye. The warriors don't use human seasons, it should be Greenleaf.
On page 116 it says Fireheart shrugged. (Read my did you noticed from Sunrise to read why this is a problem)
On page 93 Darkstripe mentions that Nightstar seemed alright at the gathering. However, Darkstripe never went to that gathering
A Dangerous Path:
On page 21, it calls Cinderpelt CinderPAW!
On page 66 it says "Another TwolegS stamped past." it is supposed to say another Twoleg
Darkest Hour:
After Scourge kills tigerstar, the book say nobody touched the body because everyone was mad at him (or something like that) and yet, when they go back there to meet with scourge, Tigerstar's body is gone, there is no mention of it at all! I guess a wild animal took it off..............but still, it's strange.
It says this about Ravenpaw on page 157 "How different he was from the nervous apperentice he had once been, bullied by his mentor, Tigerpaw".
They call Ravenpaw, Ravepaw
On page 8 in the Darkest Hour it calls Fireheart Firestar before he became leader
On Page 237 it says, 'the windclan leader' after Tallstar said something. shouldn't it be 'the windclan leader said.'
It said Firestar could just make out the dead body of TORNEAR! Tornear is in ALL the other books!
On page 125 Mistyfoot calls Tigerstar, Tigerclaw
On page 30 the first sentence says, "Bramblepaw flashed a look at Firestar " but Fireheart hasn't been made leader yet
On page 89 it says "convulsing in regular spasms that to Fireheart's horror ..." at that time he was Firestar
On page 161 and 162 it says 'he spotted the riverclan warriors Mudfur and Heavystep. there was no sign of either medicine' Mudfur is the RiverClan medicine cat.
Midnight:
On page 11 (it is talking about Sorrelpaw and then thunderpath) "it had struck her a glancing blow" I believe it should be grazing blow In Midnight, it says that Sorrelpaw becomes Sorreltail, but if you look on the character list in moonrise, it says that sorreltail is still an apprentice! She became a warrior in the last book!
"Midnight listened intently to Brambleclaw's tale of how they had journeyed to the sun-drown WATER, it should be the Sun-Drown Place
on page 215 it says, Mistyfoot looked even more confused."I know Feathertail and Stormfur sometimes felt the Clan still blamed them for having a father in RIVERCLAN," It should be thunderclan!
Moonrise:
On the cover of moonrise, there is that White Cat(Possibly Feathertail). Well On Chapters 14 and 15, that cats is on the Chapter Pics....Which is weird, cuz it never was before. But it's also found in two chapters in a row. I asked anyone else if they had a copy of moonlight, and they said that they had that problem too....So I don't think it was just My Copy.
It spells stonetellers name wrong...it spells it SONEteller
On page 16, in the 3rd paragraph, they spelled "Stormfur" "Sormfur"
On page 13, when Purdy sees the cats with Midnight, he says- "Great StarClan!" Isn't it odd that he would say that without believing in StarClan.
Dawn:
it's Willowpaw (kit) first apperence! on page 237. Dawnflower tells her to hush. This was noticed by a visitor to my site, thanks so much. On page 120 of Dawn it says - 'How could she tell him that Graystripe had been lost rescuing her? The thought PIECED her heart like a thorn.' It's supposed to say pierced
On page 278 it says "A hole yawned in the narrow path, sending Smokepaw, a Shadowclan apprentice, plummeting into nothingness." on the next page it says "Fortunately Longtail was among the cats that had been ahead of the RIVERclan apprentice."
This also brings up a little funny error, if you noticed, Smokepaw/foot, is still in the books! In Starlight they mention he died again and yet he is still listed on the Allegiances all way though the New Prophecy and in the sight he is listed as Smokefoot! In Dark River he even had a line This is a big error!
On page 134 Leafpaw says that only her, Firestar, Graystripe and Cinderpelt know about the fire and tiger prophecy, when two books earlier it says Firestar told Sandstorm about it also!
when Leafpaw was stuck in the twoleg den, she met a loner named coal, but in firestars quest, firestar also met a cat named coal when he met those cats when he lost sandstorm, could it be the same cat?
On page 179 "... Our part of the forest," Tawnypaw whispered to Squirrelpaw, it should be Tawnypelt
On Page 78 it says, "Blackstar clawed his way up after her to the top of the rock. He looked strong and determined, but his dull BLACK pelt hung from his bony frame as he climbed" Blackstar is a white cat!
On page 191 it says "A Shaft of pale sunlight sliced into the clearing and lit up the Thunderclan's golden pelt. He (Firestar) lay very still with his eyes closed." I believe they mean: "The Thunderclan leader's golden pelt." Because thunderclan is a clan, not a cat.
Starlight:
On page 14 it calls Whitepaw, Whitetail!
On page 71 that it calls Squirrelflight Squirrelpaw!!!!
On page 30 of Starlight it calls Blackstar , Blackclaw. his warrior name wasn't even blackclaw, it was blackfoot!
On pg.7 last paragraph - it said Blackclaw of WINDclan.. on the ALLIGANCES it is Blackclaw of RIVERclan
On pg.14 second paragraph - Brambleclaw said ," We saw some on our journey to the sun-drown-WATER."
It says that leafpool (leafpaw at the time)went to windclan camp to help the sick cats morningflower and darkfoot...darkfoot is never mentioned again and he isnt in the character list.
In the 4th chapter, they say winter twice instead of leafbare
On page 126, paragraph 3. It says, "A black WindClan she-cat drew he lips back in a snarl..." The black she-cat just happens to be Nightcloud! Her name was mentioned on page 133 paragraph 4.
On page 296 to 297, on the last paragraph of page 296 and the third sentence, it says "Firestar stared down at his (next page, page 297) FEET as his claws sank to the ground." I thought Twolegs had feet. Shouldn't Firestar be staring at his PAWS instead?
Twilight:
On page 310 it says: Leafpool saw a glint of pain in his amber eyes. It was talking about Crowfeather, but he has blue eyes!
on page 112 it says "When all the cats had gathered, Firestar summoned Birchkit with the flick of his tail. The young GRAY cat padded forward; the allegiances in Dark River and it says Birchfall is a light brown tabby tom
On page 81, Onestar says 'We have two new warriors, Owlfeather and Weaselfur' or something like that. But in Sunset, Owlfeather's name is Owlwhisker
On page 299, at the badger attack, it said "Staring around the hollow, she (Squirrelflight) caught a glimpse of Sootfur, his BLACK pelt barely visible in the shadows." But in the Allegiances, it says Sootfur is a lighter gray tom with amber eyes. And again, on page 300, it says, "When she (Squirrelflight) managed to scramble up again, the badger was lumbering off into the darkness, leaving the BLACK warrior (Sootfur) laying ominously still."
On page 222 Leafppol "thought nothing mattered, except gazing into his amber eyes." Crowfeather has blue eyes!
When Cinderpelt died, she was trying to deliver Sorreltail's kits, but she actually DIED protecting the kits, ONE OF WHICH was Cinderpaw/heart. So she died protecting her re-incarnated self
On page 169, Leafpool is helping Mothwing out when the Twolegs spill some thing that seems to be antifreeze, Leafpool is praised by Mothwing for helping save Beechpaw's life. "LeafPAW blinked warmly at her friend" Leafpool already earned her warrior name.
Sunset:
Tigerstar tells Darkstripe that his 2 sons will rule the whole forest, and that there will be no half-clan cats......ummmm I hate to tell him this, but Hawkfrost is half-clan.......he has loner blood as well as ThunderClan blood. Also, he has kids all over, in tons of different Clans
on page 5 Tigerstar says Firestar has SEVEN lives to lose, Firestar has SIX lives to lose, because in Firestar's Quest he lost one
The sign that was given to Leafpool and Willowpaw was only for their 2 clans, Leafpool thought it was about Hawkfrost since he was the only cat that connected the 2, but, Stormfur also connects the 2 Clans. Plus, the sign was storm clouds. Leopardshadow, a vistor to the site reminded me that Mistyfoot also is conneted to both River and Thnuder, maybe it was about her?
On page 111 it says Brightheart rolled her EYES!
On Page 115 Russetfur says "ShadowClan sticks to the warrior code." when Berrykit is trapped. Well, they aren't, because the code says 'Never let a kit suffer, no matter where it comes from' If they really did listen to the warrior code, they would have helped Berrykit right away
On page 180 Brambleclaw said to Tawnypelt: "I never had a chance to meet my father before he died. Maybe now is my chance." He has met Tigerstar! When he was an apprentice, he told Tigerstar he would never follow him.
On page 299, when Brambleclaw strikes at Hawkfrost, Hawkfrost says: "Fool!Do you think I did this alone? Do you think you're safe within your own clan? Think again!" But Brambleclaw refers to it as: "What?What do you mean?Tell me, Hawkfrost! Who do you mean?" So, we don't know if Hawkfrost planned this plot with a Thunderclan warrior, or with Tigerstar.
On page 269 Squrrelflight laughs at Brambleclaw because she says he already appointed Ferncloud for a hunting patrol, so she can't go on the Dawn patrol, but on pages 268-267 Brambleclaw appointed Sandstorm for a hunting patrol, and told her to pick two others
The Sight:
The 3 cats who first sent Leafpool the prophecy for Power of Three were Lionheart, Bluestar, and Yellowfang. Now, think about this, Jaypaw is a lot like Yellowfang, (Grumpy) Hollypaw is a lot like Bluestar (Bossy) and Lionpaw is a lot like Lionheart (mister perfect) Just an intresting fact.
They gave us the reasons for Rainwhisker and Molekit's deaths, but there was none for poor old Goldenflower.....I assume she died of old age, but it would have been nice if they metioned her.
Leafpool lied (Or forgot) when she told Jaypaw she had only visited 1 cats dream before, willowpaw, what about Brambleclaw's dream.
On page 325 of the Sight, it calls Firestar, FIRESTORM! lol This was noticed by some visitors to the site. Thanks
At the end of the Sight, in the preview of Dark River, it calls Mousepaw MouseFUR! I think that the writers were used to just writing Mousefur, from earlier in the series.(and they fixed this in the book, Dark River)
Did you notice that Ashfur is now like brambleclaw's friend? He supports him and it even made it seem he lied about Hawkfrost for him.
Littlecloud, the ShadowClan medicine cat, had a 'sign' that Warriors brought strange new prey to camp, a bird he had never seen before. Think about this, Jaypaw. A bird. Maybe Jaypaw will be important to ShadowClan some how.
Heavystep, the Elder that died in TNP, is still alive! he is still an elder, even in Dark river too. Whoops In the sight Hollypaw and Lionpaw got to go to the gathering. BUT they had only been apprentices for a half moon. And it says that apprentices DON"T usally get to go unless they did someting special
"Brightheart stiffend. 'No cat has said that you're useless. And Longtail wont thank you for being so rude about him!' She stepped back from JayPAW and lifted her chin. 'I've asked him to help with some of your training.' He wasn't Jaypaw, yet, he was still Jaykit
In Twilight and Sunset Reedwhisker is Ripplepaws mentor and when Leafpool goes to help Mothwing with the sick cats she meets the pair and Reedwhisker said that Ripplepaw was a She-cat then in the Sight Ripplepaw becomes Rippletail but it says that Rippletail it a male
On Page 275-276 where Jaypaw is at the moon pool.Jaypaw says he couldn't tell Her (meaning Leafpool) about ONESTAR'S warning to Barkface. Onestar didn't give Backface the warning it was Tallstar.
Berrypaw says that if he hasn't slapped his TAIL over Mousepaw's mouth, Mousepaw would've blurted out that Firestar was going to give part of his territory away to ShadowClan. Berrypaw has no tail, it's just a stump
On page 318 it says Leafpool has gone to WindClan to ask for catmint. WindClan came to ThunderClan to ask for catmint and then Leafpool when to RiverClan to ask for catmint
On page 238 Hollypaw is going through the thorn barrier and almost runs into Graystripe, Sandstorm and Honeypaw but on page 240 she gose to talk to Firestar and Sandstorm is grooming his ear
Dark River:
I SO don't trust Heatherpaw! first, she seems to flirt with Jaypaw a litle and now Lionpaw. She also is the one who keeps luring him out to break the rules. Also, I find it a little odd she names their play Clan, DarkClan. AND gives Lionpaw the name of LionCLAW as in TIGERCLAW. Lionpaw has a dream about a fox, then later he sneaks out with Heatherpaw and she says, "don't worry, there are no foxes" hmmmmmm. Erin Hunter did promise there would be a she-cat villian........
I had a disturbing thought about Heatherpaw..........Tabby with Blue eyes.......who does that sound like? HAWKFROST! I know, this is a huge jump. but it could happen, I mean you never know when more of Tigestar's kids are going to show up!
Tawnypelt had kits, Dawnkit, Flamekit and Tigerkit. Wouldn't Tigerstar be intrested in them? I mean, he is always trying to get his kids to join him, I think he would try to get them as well.
Tawnypelt kits names, Tigerkit (after her father) Flamekit(possible after Firestar) and Dawnkit(maybe after the ShadowClan leader in Firestar's quest,
Was Erin Hunter obessed with foxes in this book, or was that suppose to be some sort of sign to the reader? Lionpaw even had a dream aabout Foxes! The cats of old, that used to live around the lake and that used the tunnel, are most likely the same cats that used the Moonpool.
I find it strange, Sharpclaw was the name that the rouge Scratch joined Skyclan under, and now it's whatever these cats of old called their warriors. Rock, the cat from the old cats that used to live around the lake, was blind, and Jaypaw is the one who found the 'stick', and he is blind. I wonder if Rock was the one who called him there, maybe only Blind cats can read it......or something
Did you notice about Berrypaw? He has been training for like 8 1/2 moons! and so have his siblings, so it's not that he just fell behind or something. on page 206 it says Jaypaw hadn't SEEN Hollypaw since this morning. Jaypaw's blind!
on page 263 the books says "Jaypaw felt Firestar's AMBER gaze warm his fur." Firestar's eyes are emerald green!
When cinderpaw falls out of the sky oak spiderleg is with her but when hollypaw gets leafpool leafpool says "who's with her?" hollypaw repliys " brackenfur, cloudtail, mousepaw and ASHFUR!" ashfur wasn't there! and hollypaw didn't mention that spiderleg was there!
and, when Leafpool gets there, Ashfur is there and no Spiderleg!
When Jaypaw is attending his fist gathering he and he gets called over by Leafpool, Leafpool is sitting next to Barkface and Mothwing.The only problem: Mothwing wasn't there yet, none of RiverClan was. They show up a little bit later.
On page 226 it says "Heatherpaw pushed her nuzzle." I think it should be muzzle
On page 129, on the way to the gathering, it says Hollypaw ducks between Squirrelflight and Brackenfur, but then it says Squirrelflight, Brambleclaw, Dustpelt, Mousepaw and Spiderleg walk ahead, but Squirrelflight is still beside Hollypaw! Squirrelflight can't be in two places at once
On page 39 it says Cinderpaw was stopping Poppypaw from answering any more awkward questions about Lionpaw, but Poppypaw was actually the one asking the awkward questions, so it should've been Cinderpaw stopping Poppypaw from ASKING any more awkward questions
On Page 206, It said MOUSEFUR! AKA, Mousepaw. It was when they where discussing that Hollypaw hadn't showed up from training. Mousepaw was saying,"Brackenfur figured she'd been kept in camp for some reason," MouseFUR added.
On page 264, Dark River, warriors, It said Firestar was giving his last orders to his escorts, Brambleclaw and Dusltpelt. His name is DUSTPELT
Outcast:
Brook tells Hollypaw she has 'strong back legs' and that she would be able to catch prey in the mountains. SkyClan cats have strong legs and their specialty is jumping.
Spiderleg and Daisy? Spiderleg is a hypocrite, he complains about kitty pets but he will mate with one
On Page 94, Eventually the gray cat raised his tail for silence. "We will hear what Stormfur has to say." He announced. "Thank you, Stonetellar" Stormfur dipped his head. Stonetellar is a brown tabby cat, not a gray cat
I don't think it was Tigerstar or Hawkfrost Lionpaw was hearing in the battle, I believe that is his special power, he may be able to predict what to do in battle
Jaypaw's paws fit into the paw prints at the Moonpool, I believe he is related to the cats of the old tribe, perhaps one of the characters now is a distant tribe cat.
The cat in SOTC that talked about the Moonpool may have Rock, but that cat seemed too nice and gave straight answers, so again, maybe not What was the point of giving us Twist's name in the Allegiances but never mentioning it in the book?
How did Hollypaw know the story about Squirrelpaw in the fence? It was told to Lionpaw, and he never told her about it
It was pretty mean of Firestar to promise Brightheart she would get to mentor Icekit (in the sight) and then instead give it to her daughter
In the Allegiances Crag is listed as Brook's brother, but on page 107, Talon says that he is her sister!
On page 36 in the book outcast, paragraph one, right after Foxpaw is apprenticed it calls Foxpaw, Foxkit after he was named Foxpaw
On page 104 it saya "...Jaypaw could picture him now,strong and sleek-furred with anger smoldering in his blue eyes", Stormfur has AMBER eyes, not blue!
Chapter 28 page 306 it said that Lionpaw saw Squirrelflight leaping after an intruder. Why was Squirrelflight there? She was supposed to be in the tribe cave with Jaypaw to guard the left tribe cats! Don't tell me she just felt that a battle was happening and found her way all the way there?
In the preview for Eclipse that Firestar says, "they're back!"when the apprentices return from hunting, and "Let's see what they've caught!" Firestar wasn't even there at the time! Luckily, they changed it to Tawnypelt before the actual book came out (Thanks Raintalon)
Eclipse
On Page 166, Firestar interduces his clan to Sol, inculding Sandstorm. Then, a page alter, it says that Sandstorm and Squirrelflight returned from hunting. She can't be in 2 places at once
On Page 231, Hollypaw refers to Briarkit as "he" even though it is a She-Cat
Shouldn't Leafpool had known Squirrelflight was wounded? They have that bond between them where they can feel each other
On page 317, Mousefur says to Millie, " Don't worry, ill make sure Rosekit and Toadkit dont trample him." She is talking about Briarkit, who is a she-cat
The second time Lionpaw visits Tigerstar in his dream Lionpaw says, What do I do? and then it is written FIRESTAR told him
When ever one of the Clan cat discribe Sol, they say he is toroiseshell and white, but in the allegiances, he is a toroiseshell and brown.
Hollypaw,Lionpaw,and Cinderpaw are being made warriors, they get their names, but why do they get to become warriors BEFORE they do the warrior assessment?
On page 87 Sorreltail wishes for Molekit to be with his sisters at the warrior ceremony, but on page 7 of the Sight it said he was MolePAW.
On page 105, it states,'Hawkfrost was already sitting in the needle-strewn hollow, his amber eyes glowing in the half-light.'His eyes are icy blue,not amber
On page 93, it says they left theough the gorse tunnel, but that was in the old camp. The new camp has a thorn barrier.
Long Shadows:
It is possible that not only did the cats around the lake create the Tribe of Rushing Water, they might have been some of the first clan cats, the mountains aren't any further from the lake then they are from the old forest so it is a possibility.
The 'Casting of Stones' was the same as when the Tribe had to decide to go or fight in Outcast. Very nice tie-in.
His name was Stone Song, which is probably where they got the title, Stoneteller.
Her name was Half Moon, the time when medicine cats go to the Moonpool/Moonstone. And she was in love with a medicine cat, very clever.
The ancient cats left Rock behind! No one went to tell him they were leaving or good bye or anything, they just left him down in the tunnels, how rude.
It is possible that none of the three cats are related, Jayfeather might be Jay's wing, like Cinderheart is Cinderpelt, and the other two, who knows. Also, the 'three' might still be coming, new cats that haven't appeared yet.
On page 65, Jaypaw meets Raggedstar and Runningnose and makes a comment about how he doesn't know them and then about Runningnose's cold. However, he had already seen Runingnose in Eclipse when he walked it Littlecloud's dream. So he should have known who is was.
On page 76, Hollyleaf calls to Flame'paw', but this book only takes place a few days after Eclipse, in which case Flame was still a 'kit' so how did she know he had been apprenticed?
On page 248, Lionblaze didn't known Heatherpaw's warrior name but earlier knew Breezepaws, they are the same age so if he knew one, he should have known both. And again, how did they know their names when only a few days had passed between books?
On page 92 they have "ShadowClan" insted of "StarClan" Heres the part: "We have to do what Jaypaw suggested, and make a fake sign from ShadowClan. And we have to do it soon! I'll do anything to remind ShadowClan cats of their warrior ancestors."
On page 232 to 236, Lionblaze hears Spiderleg coughing in the warriors den,so take him to Leafpool.On their way,Daisy,Spiderleg's mate,is worried about Spiderleg's health,so in the medicine cats den she offers him a vole,but Spiderleg won't eat it.Then,him and Daisy have a fight.Suddenly Daisy leaves.But why is Leafpool all of a sudden saying stuff like "Kits are very precious gifts." or "You are punishing the kits by not being a better father." or even "`You've seen Brambleclaw and Graystripe and Dustpelt around their kits.I can't believe you don't see how important this is!You should cherish your kits with every breath you take." Is it me,or is Leafpool acting a little bit TOO motherly.
On page 161, Lionblaze said he saw Heatherpaw's gray fur, but she is light ginger
On page 124 of Long Shadows, after the 3 & Tawny's kits make the fake sign from StarClan, they are about to go back to their Clans when it says-(quote) "What are we going to do about out mother?" Dawnpaw asked her brother and SISTER. Dawnpaw doesn't have a sister!
On page 225, it calls Stone Song, Stone Shadow
On page 17 Its says the following, "Hazeltail launched HIMSELF onto the apprentice, trying to thrust his way towards Birchfall." In the allegiances Hazeltail is a she-cat and I do believe she is a she-cat don't you?
In Eclipse it clearly states that blossomkit (Graystripe's kit) is tortishell, but in the alligences for Long Shadows it says she's a light brown she-cat with a dark stripe along her back.
Sunrise
Whitewing isn't listed under Queens in the front back for the whole book is in the nursery.
I have a hard time believing that with his miss placed curiousity that Jayfeather didn't try to find Ashfur in StarClan and ask who killed him. I know he didn't like Ashfur, but it still seems like something Jayfeather would do.
There was no body of Hollyleaf, anyone else think she will be back?! I do, I think she will be a villian later, it would make for a good story.
I think Dovekit will be the cat chosen. Not only will we have all animal names, (Jay, Lion, Dove,) but also Jay's Wing and Dove's Wing were ancient cats who were brother and sister, it's very nice that they now have Jayfeather and Dovekit who are related.
On page 29, it says that Ashfoot shrugged. When was the last time you saw your cat shrug? Cats don't shrug, in fact, they can't because they have no collarbone! I also spotted this throughout the book but stopped writing down who and on what page.
On page 32, Cloudtail, in all his wisdom, says this: Maybe Sol caught Ashfur unawares," Unwares?
On page 49, it refers to Ashfoot as Ashfur.
On page 225, first paragraph, they call Tornear TURNear
In the allegiances Sol has tabby and white fur while in the book he is a tortoiseshell-and-white
On page 64 Brambleclaw says, 'run like a tribe of badgers is after you.' I thought it was set of badgers
On page 122 They called Brackenfur ginger again! He's golden-brown
On page 179 When Hollyleaf is counting all the sleeping cats, it doesn't not mention Lionblaze.
On page 308, when Hollyleaf is talking to Cinderheart, it says that "The wisdom in her (Cinderheart's) voice seemed to come from a much older and more experienced cat." I think that "more experienced cat" is Cinderpelt.
On Page 183 when Hollyleaf asks Brambleclaw if there's time to hunt, she says "Do we have we time to hunt?" she asked Brambleclaw. I think it should say "Do we have time to hunt" instead
On page 72 It says, "The wind hit HollyPAW in the face." when in fact she is a warrior at this point!
On page 168 it says in the 6th paragraph: Purdy instructed. "They'll flatten you as soon as look at you..." Shouldn't it be they'll flatten you as you as THEY look at you?
The Fourth Apprentice:
ON Page 3 it says that Yellowfang shrugged. Don't even get me started on this again! Cats don't and can't shrug. They have no collarbones. Also throughout the entire book, but I'm not posting every page.
On Page 45 it says that Thornclaw 'dropped the stick again' However, if you read the page and the page before it, they never mention that he 'dropped' the stick at all, which means he couldn't have done it 'again'
They keep mentioning the underground tunnels, maybe trying to elude to Hollyleaf being alive?
They never explain what happened to the kittypets after the dam was destroyed. The Clan cats didn't even say good-bye I guess, how rude.
The attack on Jayfeather by Breezepelt is rather dumb when you think about it. Poppyfrost and Jayfeather fail to report the attack to ANYONE in the Clan, when they could do so, then talk to Onestar. I think everyone would believe them because Poppyfrost has no reason to lie and Jayfeather, half-clan or not, is still a medicine cat. But, every problem in the Warriors series could be sloved if they would tell the truth from the beginning. I guess that's the 'moral' of the story. But this still bothered me in the book that they said NOTHING.
On page 288, it says "I don't suppose any of us will mind getting our paws wet in future" It's supposed to say, "in the future"
Fading Echoes
List in the allegiances it says 'Bumbleflight' when in fact his warrior name is BumbleSTRIPE
On page 91 it says, 'Thornclaw and Lionblaze squared up beside Lionblaze...' Wow! Now he can be two places at once?! This mistake should have been caguht by the editor, there is no excuse, although it is funny.
On page 245 Dovepaw says, "Say hi to Tigerheart from me!" Shouldn't it be "Say hi to Tigerheart FOR me'? I suppose it could work both ways, but I've never heard anyone say that before.
On page 288 it calls Starlingpaw 'she' when in fact Starlingpaw is a ginger TOM.
Pinepaw is mentioned to be sick when Firestar, Brambleclaw and Jayfeather visit the ShadowClan camp. However, a little later at the battle, Pinepaw is there fighting. Why would ShadowClan send a sick apprentice to a battle when they have prefectly good Warriors.
The very last page of the book the typefont changes on the word 'deaths'. It's fairly noticeable and is probably the publishers fault more then the writer. It's still amusing, however.
On page 187 it calls Blossomfall BlossomPAW after she is made a warrior
On one of the pages it says: "Dovepaw's blue eyes flashed." This is confusing, on the cover of 'The Fourth Apprentice' she has green eyes, in the actual book she has amber, now blue?
Chapters 23 and 24 have the same picture as teh header, which is odd.
Night Whispers On page 4 it says; "Mudfur, the old WindClan medicine cat..." however, Mudfur wasn't the WindClan medicine cat, he was teh RiverClan medicine cat!
On page 8 it says; "Hazeltail glanced at him with scorn in her eyes and pressed closer to Mousewhisker, lapping at her sister's bleeding ruffled fur." But Mousewhisker is a Tom! He is related to Hazeltail, but it's not her sister.
Firestar's Quest:
In it allegiances it lists all the ShadowClan warriors under "apprentices"!
At the end of Darkest hour, Bluestar says, "No Firestar, you are wrong, there have never been four clans, there have always been five" Was she talking of SkyClan, or StarClan?
On page 443, it calls Petal Petalnose before she gets her Warrior name! Editor must have missed that one too
Firestar is thinking about the rat battle and is worried about the SkyClan cats and he thinks to himself (not quoted prefectly,) "They only have 1 life to lose, I have 6, I have to fight harder" ............I guess Firestar, as great as he is, can't do math. He has 8 lives left, he lost 1 in Darkest hour, and after he says this he loses 1 more, and then he loses 1 on the way to the lake, a tree falls on him. that means, as far as we know, he has 6 lives left by the Power of Three: the Sight.
If Spottedleaf and Tigerclaw were of SkyClan blood, that means that Brambleclaw, Mothwing, Hawkfrost and Tawnypelt, are also of SkyClan blood, which means, that SkyClan really does still live on in the four clans. (And it's funny to about Tigerstar, knowing how he feels about 'half-clan' cats lol) Spottedleaf seems to be more powerful then the rest of StarClan, I wonder if why she is able to walk in the dark forest, where Tigerstar is, is because she has some family ties with him
Jaypaw, Hollypaw and Lionpaw all have SkyClan blood as well, I think this must be part of the Mystery in The Power of Three. Maybe thats why they have their 'powers' and why it was Skywatcher who gave the prophcey to Firestar.
They say that Firestar and Sandstorm gave Leafkit her name in memory of Leafdapple and Spottedleaf, I think Squirrelkit gets the second part of her warrior name (Flight) After Birdflight, the Mate of Cloudstar.
On page 17, paragraph 3, it says, "Thornclaw was emerging from the gorse tunnel WITH HIS APPRENTICE, SOOTPAW" Thornclaw didn't have an apprentice yet! On page 105, paragraphs 1-7, Firestar talks to Longtail about changing Sootpaw's mentor (Longtail) to Thornclaw, due to (Longtail's) condition. Also, on the Allegiances section, under current day ThunderClan, Longtail didn't have an apprentice, but Thornclaw did. It kind of spoiled the book a little.
At the end of Firestar's quest, where Firestar's with Squirrelkit and Leafkit, it says that Whitewing would be apprenticed soon (meaning that she was six moons old). Then moons pass. Squirrelkit and Leafkit get apprenticed. Then Squirrelpaw goes on the journy with Brambleclaw and everyone. Whitewing is still an apprentice. Squirrelpaw and Brambleclaw return. They take the Clans to the forest, and Squirrelpaw becomes a warrior. But Whitewing is still an apprentice, and is for two or three books afterword. She was six moons older than Squirrelpaw. She would have been at least 18 moons old by the times she became a warrior
On page 86, Smudge says, "Sometimes I think my TWOLEGS are stupid. I asked and asked to come out, but would they open the door?" Kittypets don't say Twolegs, they say Housefolk
Bluestar's Prophecy
On page 48, it mentions that Speckletail kitted, but she wasn't in the nursery eariler in the story. I suppose the time frame fits, but just barely.
On page 48 Bluekit sents Wildflight, Adderfang and Sparrowpelt. Later, when she meets up with them, Thrushpelt is also on the patrol. I find it hard to believe Bluekit can seprate all her clanmates scents BUT Thrushpelt.
On page 107 it mentions Bluepaw's pray as being a mouse and Snowpaw's prey being a shrew. But flip back to page 103 and you'll see that Bluepaw had chosen a Sparrow and Snowpaw has a mouse! This is one of my favorite errors as of late, mostly becaus eit's big and funny.
On page 349 it says "...they've got another think coming." It should be the word THING rather then THINK. Although I am guilty of typing that tmistake too, the editor should have caught this.
On page 479 there is a space missing between a word and a coma, "I know,little one." It's a bit hard to catch, but if you look you will see it.
Chapter 44 had confusing time frames, it starts mention that Bluestar is sitting in newleaf sun. Then the next page says that newleaf has finally arrived...a moon later. I think they meant to make the time be many moons aprat, but it didn't come across that way.
In one field guide, Bluestar mentions she didn't know that Fireheart was the fire in the prophecy, not even when she saw the sunlight hit his pelt in the camp when he first came. Yet, in BP she knew it from before he even ventured into the forest.
I have hard time believing that RiverClan and ThunderClan never put together the missing kits. It seems to me that ThunderClan would have annouced at the gathering that they lost kits, and RiverClan would annouce they found kits. NO ONE questioned this? Especially when the kits got named in RiverClan and had the names Bluestar had given them? The whole thing just seems fishy...no pun intended.
Did anyone else find a few of the pairings...disturbing? I mean, Pinestar is on his last life and choose Leopardfoot as a mate when she was only an apprentice when the book started. That's just not right. Thrushpelt, as much as I liked him, was too old for Bluestar too. And countless others throughout the book that I couldn't even list them all. I don't mind a few moons older or younger, but some are just too much.
On page 23 when Bluekit & Snowkit are visiting the elders, it says that Featherwhisker glanced at Bluekit & LEOPARDKIT. Leopardkit & Patchkit were being shown the ravine by Dapplepaw. SNOWKIT was with Bluekit.
On page 96 “Adderfang and STORMFUR, sharing a thrush beneath Highrock, swung their broad heads to stare at Goosefeather.” It should, of course, be StormTAIL
On page 55 White-Eye and the shrugging...and throughout the rest of the book.
On page 123 says Bluepaw hadnt even looked at her mother before the battle, but she walked with her mother to the WindClan camp
On page 129 it calls Hawkheart gray flecked, but in the alligneces, he is mottled brown
On page 272 it says Pinestar is breaking the warrior code by living like a kittypet, but thats not in the code until AFTER he became a kittypet
On page 297 it calls Shellheart, the riverclan deputy, a SHE but in the allagnces Shellheart is a HE
On page 347 it says its against the code to have friends in other clans, but in code of the clans, it says " You may have friends with cats in other clans, but your loyalty remains to your own clan"
For her whole life, Snowfur and her sister had the same ending to their names (kit,paw,fur)
Acording to Bluestar's prophecy, Rosekit/tail is a kit in the book, Speckletail is a Warrior, well in the orginal warriors series, RoseTail is an elder, and Speckletail is a warrior and dosent retire till a Dangerous Path, how is this possible? Shouldn't Speckletail be the oldest cat in thunderclan, not One-eye, since One-eye (then Whitepaw) was an apprentice at the beggining or the book.
On page 353, it says "Adderfang had come. Everything would be fine now. Dappletail was with him,and Windflight and Thrushpelt." then a few paragraphs later, it say "She felt White-eye's tail drape her shoulders." how is White-eye there suddenly, and the rest of the time, Dappletail isn't?
In the end, page 506 to be more specific, while Bluestar is talking to Redtail, she says that she "had led four good lives" but then says to herself that she has actually lost seven and only has two left. This can't be possible, because after Firestar joins Thunderclan, she loses three lives. One in Into the Wild fighting the rats, one in Fire and Ice to greencough, and one in A Dangerous Path when she nearly drowned saving Fireheart.
SkyClan's Destiny
Under the Allegiances it lists Bouncefire and Tinycloud as Clovertail's son and dauther, and yet it doesn't list that under Rockshade, evne though he is also their sibling.
Under the Allegiances it lists Fallowfern's mate and the father of her kits as "Hunchfoot". However, we learn in the book that it's actually Waspwhisker. What's worse is that there isn't even a character named "Hunchfoot" in the whole book!
What was the point of listing Rose, Bella, Lily, Oscar and Nutmeg? Yes, some of them appeared as random cats in the battle, but they weren't named, therefor they don't need to be listed under the Allegiances.
Weren't the previous Warriors books always saying that after six moons kittypets went to the "cutter"? Why. then, are ALL the Daylight-Warriors non-fixed? I suppose some humans don't fix their cats, but for the most part, people do to prevent spraying in the house and bredding for females. I have a hard time believing that ALL the Daylight-Warriors are fine.
On page 84 they make say something along the lines of "Shorty shrugged" well, you KNOW how much this always annoys me since cats can't shrug because they have no collarbones. I'm not going to list every page they say "Shrug" but rest assured that it appears many more times beyond this one.
On page 124, when Stick is explaining the plan, it gets confusing at one part as to who is talking; ""Okay, pretend this is the rubbish heap." Sharpclaw pulled out several clawfuls of moss and bracken from Leafstar's nest and piled it up in the middle of the den. "The rats are in..."" Do you see how they don't remind us STICK is talking and SHARPCLAW only moved things? It's confusing when reading fast, because it seems like Sharpclaw is talking.
The Lost Warrior
It says, "Right Off the bat Millie's great" It's a baseball term! How would a cat know that?
Warriors Refudge:
When Graystripe is trying to get the little twoleg away from the pond, he mentions "their daughter" How would Graystripe, a cat, know what gender a human was?
Warriors Return:
On the second to last page it shows something strange. It is clear that Leopardstar, Firestar, and Blackstar are there but the forth leader, supposedly Onestar, looks awfully close to Tallstar, but he died in Starlight.
In the sight Squirrelflight pointed out to the clans that Graystripe brought someone {millie} with him, but in warriors return, it said that Graystripe introduced Millie when he didn't
Into the Woods (Tigerstar and Sasha):
On page 78 at the bottom Tigerstar says: I have a plan to lure a pack of dogs into their (Thunderclan's) camp. Then we'll be rid of that filthy kittypet Firestar and his clan of kittypets and halfbreeds once and for all. Firestar wasn't leader when Tigerstar was doing things with the dogs and there were hardly and kityypets then just Cloudtail and Fireheart well Graystripe had a forbidden love previously too.
Near the end of the book when Tigerstar asks Sasha to join ShadowClan, Sasha asks if she could think about it. Tigerstar says he'll go by her den TOMORROW NIGHT. Sasha goes back and finds Pine, an early friend hacking and wheezing. Sasha didn't want to end up like Pine, so she hurried to ShadowClan. She overhears Tigerstar and his plots to rule the forest. Sasha is terrified and runs back. When she arrives, Tigerstar soon appears, asking if she wanted to join ShadowClan. I sure don't think running, overhearing Tigerstar and arriving back didn't take a day did it?
Secrets of the Clans:
In the first series, it said that Bluestar only mentored Deputy's kids, in SOTC, it says she mentored Frostpaw, (Frostfur) and Runningpaw (Runningwind). Does that mean that they are Redtail's kits?
On Page 120, it calls Sharptooth SHARPCLAW! I guess whoever edited just missed it.
On page 64, it says that Tigerstar was killed by BLOOD, leader of BloodClan.....I think they meant Scourge. whoops! this was noticed by some visitors to my site, Thank you!
On page 105 of "Secrets of the Clans" under Redtail it says(quote), "Firestar ever met Bluestar's first deputy, but he worked...." Ever should be never!
Under Crookedstar's deputies it only says Leopardfur, but Oakheart was the first deptuy before her
In the Warrior Code, and there is nothing about Medicine cats having kits!
Cats of the Clans:
On Page 4, Rocks says, "I envied them their skills." what kind of grammar is that? it would be fine if there was a coma even, but there isn't
On Ashfur's profile, the last line says, "he has a story of his own" Implying that he still has somethign to do int eh books, maybe a hint he is or isn't the traitor.
On Crowfeather's page, It says, "I wonder if StarClan had forgotten about him compeletly. Or perphaps they were punishing him for some misdeed he hasn't yet done?" This implies to me that Crowfeatehr still hasn't done everythign bad he is going too. Maybe a future story?
On Cloudstar and Skywatcher's page, it says that Skywatcher was the last decendant of SkyClan, but that isn't true as Cherrypaw, Leafdapple, Sparrowpaw and more all were. And on the very next page in COTC, it says that Leafdapple was a decendant, they can't get is straight!
Did anyone else find it stupid that Talon got a picture but Brook didn't I thought it was Brook until I read the plate under it that read Talon of Swooping Eagle
The pic of Graypool, Mistyfoot and Stonefur is incorrect because Stone and Misty were both supposed to have blue eyes.
To me it seems like the authors are implying that Brambleclaw really is evil and that the whole thing in Sunset was a setup (we don't know Brambleclaw's thoughts anymore after that, so how would we know?) and that Ashfur is really the good guy.
In the illustration of Graystripe, he has green eyes, not amber.
Brightheart has an amber eye, not a green eye.
Rock said he could see the kits tingle or jump, but he can't he's blind!
They said Leafdapple(Leafstar) was a kittypet before she joined SkyClan, She was a rouge
It shows crowfeather with AMBER eyes Crowfeather has BLUE eyes.
On Heatherpaws page, it says 7 lives were nearly lost that night, weren't there 8 cats? The three ThunderClan cats Jaypaw, Lionpaw, and Hollypaw, 2 WindClan apprentices, Heatherpaw and Breezepaw, and the 3 kits.
According to Rock, Crookedstar accepted Mistykit and Stonekit into RiverClan because it might give Bluestar (then BlueFUR) second thoughts about attacking "the Clan across the river". But Bluefur wasn't leader yet! She wasn't even deputy! And Crookedstar would think (if anything) that she COULDN'T be deputy because of her kits! And since when do normal warriors give the order to attack?
Code of the Clans:
Throughout the whole book, Clan leaders kept interrupting signs from StarClan without consulting their medicine cats, something that is usually frowned upon.
Rosetail is mentioned, her mother an elder, dies. This is around the same time as Darkstripe and Longtail being warriors, due to the content of that section. However, in Book 1, into the wild, Rosetail is already an elder. Either her mother was super old and so was she, or the timeline is a little messy.
On Page 65, another cat does the impossible-shrugs. If you didn't know from early posts, cats lack collar bones and so can't shrug.
Squirrelflight says she did her warriors vigil in the old forest. However, she was made a warrior in the lake camp.
Mothpelt referred to his father as "Father" when all other cats in every other book call their parents by their names.
On Page 98 says "Thunder and Lightning that shook the forest to it's roots." Similar to the Prophecy in the 2nd series.
On Page 109 Whitestorm calls Graypaw "Graystripe" even though it was already said he was GrayPAW. Maybe he had a vision of the future!
On page 42, it says,"Darkstripe was peering at Longstripe as if he could read his thoughts." It's supposed to be Longtail, Not Longstripe.
On page 40, it says Longtail shrugged. Again, Cats can't shrug
On page 107, Poppycloud is Mottlepaw's mentor and mother. But in Firestar's Quest it mentions that mothers can't mentor their own kits due to the pact that they'd be too soft on them
In "Hunting Fish!" it says about White-eye, "...her ears looked huge against her head but HIS eyes shone as she..." (Thanks Rainpath)
Battles of the Clans
On page 103, it states that the cat attacks a another cat and 'remembers her from the gathering, Whitetail'. or something along those lines. However, Whitetail is a WindClan cat, and no where in this section is WindClan mentioned, meaning that they added her to an incorrect Clan.
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Fan fact!
Ravenpaw, Graypaw and Firepaw were best friends. Firepaw had an orenge pelt, Graypaw has a gray pelt and Ravenpaw has a black pelt. Lionpaw has and orangeish pelt, Jaypaw has a gray pelt and Hollypaw has a black pelt
But think about this......
Firestar and Graystripe are still around while Ravenpaw left the clans(Because of Tigerstar)
Lionblaze and Jayfeather are still around while Hollyleaf left the clans(Died in tunnel)
So the cats with orangish and gray pelts are still around while the cats with black pelts are gone
Fun fact!
In "The Darkest Hour" on page 297, it says Bramblepaw, Tawnypaw, Stormpaw, and Featherpaw were all fighting together against Bone. Well, that's everybody accept for Crowpaw who went to the Sun-drown place.(Crowpaw would be a kit then anyways)
looking around Squirrelpaw realized that all the cats from the sun-drown-place were beside her - Brambleclaw, Stormfur, Crowpaw, and Tawnypaw even though tawntpelt was a warrior like 2 books before this one and they did it again on page 179 the first sentence again tawnypaw is wrong
You know how Stormkit and Featherkit were nursed by a Thunderclan queen.That queen was Goldenflower, and she had Bramblekit and Tawnykit then, nursing with Stormkit and Featherkit.Then later Brambleclaw and Stormfur become best friends, which is cool.
the dead rabbit in the pool where mothwing used the water from as a sign from starclan. when firestar was made deputy late, to punish bluestar they made her fresh-kill turn into crowfood. just before the dead rabbit, onewhisker was made deputy the wrong way so the crowfood could just be the punishm
Fun Fact
It says in one of the earlier books (I think Into the Wild) that all the apprentices must make a journey to the moonstone before they are made warriors, but after Firepaw Graypaw go, it's not mentioned again I must add on to the one above, it seems from the Preview of OUTCAST (next book in Power of Three) that they mention the fact Apprentices don't travel anymore, I wonder if Erin Hunter heard the fans on this one!
When ThunderClan and RiverClan were helping the ShadowClan cats escape their camp (because the Twoleg monsters were attacking it), Squirrelflight helped a tortiseshell queen with two kits get out (specifically NOT Tallpoppy). The name of this queen was never told, and she was never mentioned again. Also, Tallpoppy is the only queen listed in the Allegiances
this is kinda a prediction, When Leafpaw gets aptured by 2legs, and meets this cat named Coal, next to the cage with Cody, the one that she helps, I think thats the same cat in Firestar's Quest. The one that always brags alot. I think thats the same cat that is in the cage with Cody and Leafpaw.
Smudge's garden looks out into the "destroyed forest" which means that if u were standing on the border of skyclan and thunderclan u would be able to see the camp, right? If that is true then why did Redstar say that his patrols scented more patrols on skyclan's territory when they could see the camp from their side of the border. think about that
Firestar and Bluestar have lost lives. We all know that. But did you notice the similarities between them?
Buestar lost one live because of rats.(Into the Wild) Firestar lost a life because of rats. (Firestar's Quest) Bluestar lost a life to greencough. (Fire and Ice. I think) Firestar lost a life to greencough. (Long Shadows) We don't know how Bluestar lost the other 6 lives.
I happened to remember something from the Code of the Clans book. In the story about how the code about always helping kits in trouble was made, it says at the end that the kits that had died had suddenly become adults once they reached Starclan. While that would make sense, it is stated in one of the books in the New Prophecy Quest series (not sure which one) that cats that died stayed in the form that they had died in once they reached Starclan. Therefore kits would stay kits. It uses an example with Holykit and Lark(?)kit to show this.
Also, Mistystar brought up a good point because both Bluestar and Tallstar are younger in POT in StarClan.
Willowpelt died from a bager by protecting her son Sootfur. (Sootpaw at the time). But then Sootfur died from a bager too! Just an interesting fact.
Mistyfoot was a senior warrior when Rusty joined the Clan. Mousefur was just turned into a warrior. Now Mousefur has been an elder for more than a series and Mistyfoot is going to get nine lives in Fading Echoes? She is old.
Pinestars living decendents are everywhere except windclan. they are Tawnypelt and her 3 kits in shadowclan, mothwing in riverclan, and brambleclaw in thunderclan. (this is because leopardfoot was pinestars mate, and tigerclaw was her son, making brambleclaw and tawnypelt her grandchildren{grandkits?} and tawnypelts kits her great grandchildren{kits?}
Ever notice how White-Eye/One-Eye is the only one with a hyphion? At first i thought it was because of the 2 "E"'s next to eachother, but with names like blackkit, they dont hyphionate it at all, so why should it not be White-eye or One-eye?
Rownclaw:
ROWANCLAW changes genders! in midnight, it's a SHE and in the Starlight, it's a HE!
The joys of disappearing cats!
Boulder: Appears and Disappears randomly though the Allegiances
Hints That Leafpool and Crowfeather Are the Real Parents of Holly, Jay, and Lion from the Sight: (From Wildfire)
“Leafpool always thinks she can win us over just because she brings wool for our nests from the moorland,’ Jaykit hissed, “Or pieces of honeycomb to lick.”
Nothing’s troubling me,” Hollykit answered at once. “But I have something important to ask you.”
A look close to alarm flashed momentarily across Leafpool’s gaze. “What?”
She stopped midsentence, then meowed gently, “Being a medicine cat is a big commitment. You will rarely fight in battles or go on patrol. You won’t be able to take a mate, or have kits.” Hollykit saw her eyes darken with sadness. Was that regret she saw in their amber depths?
“I will teach her everything I know,” Leafpool promised. She touched Hollypaw’s muzzle with hers, but she didn’t meet Hollypaw’s eyes; instead, she looked past her, her expression clouded.
Surprised, Hollypaw turned and saw that Leafpool was looking at Squirrelflight. She wondered why there was sadness in both cats’ eyes.
Jaypaw bowed his head, his pelt burning with embarrassment. To make it worse, he could tell Squirrelflight was feeling an awkwardness that strengthened as Crowfeather went on. “Do your kits always go out by themselves?”
She tensed suddenly, jerking her head to stare at Crowfeather as he pushed his way through the brambles. Jaypaw’s fur pricked as tension set the air crackling like lightening in greenleaf.
“Hello, Crowfeather,” Leafpool meowed. She sounded as though she had a burr caught in her throat.
“Leafpool.” Crowfeather’s greeting was curt, but for the first time Jaypaw sensed some feeling other irritation stir beneath the Windclan warrior’s pelt. “I was out with Breezepaw and his mentor when we found him.”
Leafpool stiffened. “Your son’s an apprentice already?” Her mew was brittle.
“He is,” Crowfeather replied, his voice strangely flat.
He was still vaguely aware of the piercing emotion that raced between Crowfeather and Leafpool, but even that slid away as he slipped into the comforting stillness of sleep.
A faint memory stirred of a long, snowy journey, where his mother’s voice had comforted him and two soft pelts had urged him on.
“It takes some cats longer to see past their weaknesses clearly enough to appreciate their strengths,” Leafpool meowed, “And until they do, they feel every hurt like a tongue on raw flesh.”
Jaypaw felt that Leafpool was urging him to understand more than Brightheart’s anger, but he didn’t want to about it now.
“I would give my last drop of blood to save your kit,” Leafpool meowed softly to Crowfeather. “You know that.”
Jaypaw flinched at the tension between them, pricking the air like rain.
Our kit was lucky that Jaypaw was here.” Nightcloud’s comment was edged with sharpness.
On page 20 in Into the Wild, it says Bluestar is a queen but nobody knows yet. Spoiler alert!!! *WEeEeE WoOoO ect.*
On the Power of Three family Tree it says Sorreltail and Brackenfur had kits, but where there kids are in the Family Tree it says they had Hazelkit but she died,but really they had Molekit and he died.
On page 15 it says it's Graypaw's first night as an apprentice, but it seems wrid because you would think they wouldn't send a young apprentice out on it's first night. Also Graypaw was ahead of Bluestar and Lionheart.
On page 45 it says Tigerclaw's ears was split in a deep vee shape. It should be V not vee.
On page 64 Firepaw asked Graypaw if he has ever been to a Gathering. Earlier in the book it says it's Graypaw's first night out as an apprentice. That was about 2 nights ago.
Tigerclaw says that loners are selfish...he appears to hate them, so why later does he mate with Sasha
Ravenpaw and Dustpaw's parents are never metioned, not only that, their colors don't fit in. I always thought Dustpaw and Sandpaw were brother and sister, just by the way they act toward one another. (Although some people think they liked each other....I didn't see that at all) Also, alot of fans believed Ravenpaw was Goldenflower's kit. I have a few issues with this, 1 she wouldn't have let Tigerclaw push him around then (since she was his mate) 2 The official site's family trees tell us no one is Ravenpaw's parents and 3, when Ravenpaw "dies" goldenflower doesn't seem to care at all
page 44 last paragraph, Bluestar is called Blusetar! whoops!
on page 141 they call Graypaw (or Greypaw if your in the UK) Grewpaw! wow! thats a big mess up! this was noticed by some visitors to my site, thank you so much!
When Rusty met Graypaw, Graypaw said it was his first night as an apprentice. How would he know the territory that well, and since when does the Clan allow for apprentices wandering off in the middle of the night
At the start of chapter two on page 20 it calls Bluestar a queen. Readers have no idea that she even has kits yet.
On page 45, paragraph 2, last sentence, "One of his (Tigerclaw) ears was split into a deep VEE shape" It should be V shape, not VEE
Bluestar looses a life from the rat attack, When firepaw asked if she was dead, tigerclaw said shes in the HANDS of starclan now, cats have paws not hands!
On Page 181, "Firepaw followed a few paces behind Graypaw, but Ravenpaw was flagging." It should be "lagging" Since when do cats flag?
Darkstripe is given Dustpaw to train after Redtail dies it says it's his FIRST apprentice but in Fire and Ice when Longtail gets his first apprentice it says he he was Darkstripe's apprentice.
Redtail was killed after a battle with RiverClan and we see Ravenpaw, Tigerclaw, and Redtail (dead) return to the camp yet there aren't any other warriors seen coming back, and no other warriors are noted to be injured and no one says anything about it till Ravenpaw shows up. Surely there'd have been more warriors.
Blackclaw of RiverClan is senior warrior when Rusty joins ThunderClan, but he's still a warrior in Power of Three even after his apprentice, Heavystep, became an elder!
Fire and Ice:
on page 15 in Fire and Ice, it calls Fireheart, Firepaw.
In Fire and Ice, when Cinderpaw says "Oh! I remember the scent from the kits that were stolen from Brokenstar." Well, she was one of the kits, so how does she remember it? Maybe she remembers it off herself.
It repeats a line but changes it by one word when it repeats it: Page 12, "Redtail had been the ThunderClan deputy before Tigerclaw. Fireheart had never met him, but he knew Redtail had been deeply respected by all the Clan." - Page 18, "Redtail had been the ThunderClan deputy before Lionheart. Fireheart had never met him, but he knew Redtail had been deeply respected by all the Clan."
When Thornclaw and Brightheart are apprenticed Bluestar says Frostfur feels her other kits are ready. But isn't it a bit strange that Thornpaw, Brightpaw, Cinderpaw, and brackenpaw are all from the same liter but apprenticed at differant times.
Blackclaw, a warrior of RiverClan doesn't age! Isn't it strange how he is still alive and a warrior when his apprentice, Heavystep, is made senior in the POT series? and how Shadepaw, one of his other apprentices was one of the elders who stayed behind? In Long Shadows he is still listed as a Warrior!
Forest of Secrets:
Fireheart is at a gathering and he is listening to elders and it mentions that one of the elders names was Crowfur but there was no Crowfur ever on the lists and he is never mentioned again!
In the allegiances it calls Cinderpaw, CinderPELT but she doesn't have the name Cinderpelt yet.
Bluestar is admiting to Fireheart that she had kits. "He (Mosskit) died with me by the river," she had said. But Mosskit is female!
A RiverClan queen is fussing over Silverstream at a Gathering because she is worried that Silverstream won't be able to make it back to camp since she pregnant. Silverstream calls the queen Greenflower, but there is no Greenflower ever mentioned any where else or in the Allegiances!
Rising Storm:
On page 29 it calls Cinderpelt, Cinderpaw!
on page 120 of Rising Storm it says "Sandstorm came dashing over to greet them with the good news. "Willowpelt had two she-cats and a tom!" That would be Sorreltail, Rainwhisker and Sootfur, 2 of them are toms!
On page 156 of rising storm, it says, Over the next few days, the streams in thunderClan territory dwindled until the only freshwater to be found was near the RiverClan border, on the far side of Sunningrocks. "There's never been a summer like it," Grumbled One-eye. The warriors don't use human seasons, it should be Greenleaf.
On page 116 it says Fireheart shrugged. (Read my did you noticed from Sunrise to read why this is a problem)
On page 93 Darkstripe mentions that Nightstar seemed alright at the gathering. However, Darkstripe never went to that gathering
A Dangerous Path:
On page 21, it calls Cinderpelt CinderPAW!
On page 66 it says "Another TwolegS stamped past." it is supposed to say another Twoleg
Darkest Hour:
After Scourge kills tigerstar, the book say nobody touched the body because everyone was mad at him (or something like that) and yet, when they go back there to meet with scourge, Tigerstar's body is gone, there is no mention of it at all! I guess a wild animal took it off..............but still, it's strange.
It says this about Ravenpaw on page 157 "How different he was from the nervous apperentice he had once been, bullied by his mentor, Tigerpaw".
They call Ravenpaw, Ravepaw
On page 8 in the Darkest Hour it calls Fireheart Firestar before he became leader
On Page 237 it says, 'the windclan leader' after Tallstar said something. shouldn't it be 'the windclan leader said.'
It said Firestar could just make out the dead body of TORNEAR! Tornear is in ALL the other books!
On page 125 Mistyfoot calls Tigerstar, Tigerclaw
On page 30 the first sentence says, "Bramblepaw flashed a look at Firestar " but Fireheart hasn't been made leader yet
On page 89 it says "convulsing in regular spasms that to Fireheart's horror ..." at that time he was Firestar
On page 161 and 162 it says 'he spotted the riverclan warriors Mudfur and Heavystep. there was no sign of either medicine' Mudfur is the RiverClan medicine cat.
Midnight:
On page 11 (it is talking about Sorrelpaw and then thunderpath) "it had struck her a glancing blow" I believe it should be grazing blow In Midnight, it says that Sorrelpaw becomes Sorreltail, but if you look on the character list in moonrise, it says that sorreltail is still an apprentice! She became a warrior in the last book!
"Midnight listened intently to Brambleclaw's tale of how they had journeyed to the sun-drown WATER, it should be the Sun-Drown Place
on page 215 it says, Mistyfoot looked even more confused."I know Feathertail and Stormfur sometimes felt the Clan still blamed them for having a father in RIVERCLAN," It should be thunderclan!
Moonrise:
On the cover of moonrise, there is that White Cat(Possibly Feathertail). Well On Chapters 14 and 15, that cats is on the Chapter Pics....Which is weird, cuz it never was before. But it's also found in two chapters in a row. I asked anyone else if they had a copy of moonlight, and they said that they had that problem too....So I don't think it was just My Copy.
It spells stonetellers name wrong...it spells it SONEteller
On page 16, in the 3rd paragraph, they spelled "Stormfur" "Sormfur"
On page 13, when Purdy sees the cats with Midnight, he says- "Great StarClan!" Isn't it odd that he would say that without believing in StarClan.
Dawn:
it's Willowpaw (kit) first apperence! on page 237. Dawnflower tells her to hush. This was noticed by a visitor to my site, thanks so much. On page 120 of Dawn it says - 'How could she tell him that Graystripe had been lost rescuing her? The thought PIECED her heart like a thorn.' It's supposed to say pierced
On page 278 it says "A hole yawned in the narrow path, sending Smokepaw, a Shadowclan apprentice, plummeting into nothingness." on the next page it says "Fortunately Longtail was among the cats that had been ahead of the RIVERclan apprentice."
This also brings up a little funny error, if you noticed, Smokepaw/foot, is still in the books! In Starlight they mention he died again and yet he is still listed on the Allegiances all way though the New Prophecy and in the sight he is listed as Smokefoot! In Dark River he even had a line This is a big error!
On page 134 Leafpaw says that only her, Firestar, Graystripe and Cinderpelt know about the fire and tiger prophecy, when two books earlier it says Firestar told Sandstorm about it also!
when Leafpaw was stuck in the twoleg den, she met a loner named coal, but in firestars quest, firestar also met a cat named coal when he met those cats when he lost sandstorm, could it be the same cat?
On page 179 "... Our part of the forest," Tawnypaw whispered to Squirrelpaw, it should be Tawnypelt
On Page 78 it says, "Blackstar clawed his way up after her to the top of the rock. He looked strong and determined, but his dull BLACK pelt hung from his bony frame as he climbed" Blackstar is a white cat!
On page 191 it says "A Shaft of pale sunlight sliced into the clearing and lit up the Thunderclan's golden pelt. He (Firestar) lay very still with his eyes closed." I believe they mean: "The Thunderclan leader's golden pelt." Because thunderclan is a clan, not a cat.
Starlight:
On page 14 it calls Whitepaw, Whitetail!
On page 71 that it calls Squirrelflight Squirrelpaw!!!!
On page 30 of Starlight it calls Blackstar , Blackclaw. his warrior name wasn't even blackclaw, it was blackfoot!
On pg.7 last paragraph - it said Blackclaw of WINDclan.. on the ALLIGANCES it is Blackclaw of RIVERclan
On pg.14 second paragraph - Brambleclaw said ," We saw some on our journey to the sun-drown-WATER."
It says that leafpool (leafpaw at the time)went to windclan camp to help the sick cats morningflower and darkfoot...darkfoot is never mentioned again and he isnt in the character list.
In the 4th chapter, they say winter twice instead of leafbare
On page 126, paragraph 3. It says, "A black WindClan she-cat drew he lips back in a snarl..." The black she-cat just happens to be Nightcloud! Her name was mentioned on page 133 paragraph 4.
On page 296 to 297, on the last paragraph of page 296 and the third sentence, it says "Firestar stared down at his (next page, page 297) FEET as his claws sank to the ground." I thought Twolegs had feet. Shouldn't Firestar be staring at his PAWS instead?
Twilight:
On page 310 it says: Leafpool saw a glint of pain in his amber eyes. It was talking about Crowfeather, but he has blue eyes!
on page 112 it says "When all the cats had gathered, Firestar summoned Birchkit with the flick of his tail. The young GRAY cat padded forward; the allegiances in Dark River and it says Birchfall is a light brown tabby tom
On page 81, Onestar says 'We have two new warriors, Owlfeather and Weaselfur' or something like that. But in Sunset, Owlfeather's name is Owlwhisker
On page 299, at the badger attack, it said "Staring around the hollow, she (Squirrelflight) caught a glimpse of Sootfur, his BLACK pelt barely visible in the shadows." But in the Allegiances, it says Sootfur is a lighter gray tom with amber eyes. And again, on page 300, it says, "When she (Squirrelflight) managed to scramble up again, the badger was lumbering off into the darkness, leaving the BLACK warrior (Sootfur) laying ominously still."
On page 222 Leafppol "thought nothing mattered, except gazing into his amber eyes." Crowfeather has blue eyes!
When Cinderpelt died, she was trying to deliver Sorreltail's kits, but she actually DIED protecting the kits, ONE OF WHICH was Cinderpaw/heart. So she died protecting her re-incarnated self
On page 169, Leafpool is helping Mothwing out when the Twolegs spill some thing that seems to be antifreeze, Leafpool is praised by Mothwing for helping save Beechpaw's life. "LeafPAW blinked warmly at her friend" Leafpool already earned her warrior name.
Sunset:
Tigerstar tells Darkstripe that his 2 sons will rule the whole forest, and that there will be no half-clan cats......ummmm I hate to tell him this, but Hawkfrost is half-clan.......he has loner blood as well as ThunderClan blood. Also, he has kids all over, in tons of different Clans
on page 5 Tigerstar says Firestar has SEVEN lives to lose, Firestar has SIX lives to lose, because in Firestar's Quest he lost one
The sign that was given to Leafpool and Willowpaw was only for their 2 clans, Leafpool thought it was about Hawkfrost since he was the only cat that connected the 2, but, Stormfur also connects the 2 Clans. Plus, the sign was storm clouds. Leopardshadow, a vistor to the site reminded me that Mistyfoot also is conneted to both River and Thnuder, maybe it was about her?
On page 111 it says Brightheart rolled her EYES!
On Page 115 Russetfur says "ShadowClan sticks to the warrior code." when Berrykit is trapped. Well, they aren't, because the code says 'Never let a kit suffer, no matter where it comes from' If they really did listen to the warrior code, they would have helped Berrykit right away
On page 180 Brambleclaw said to Tawnypelt: "I never had a chance to meet my father before he died. Maybe now is my chance." He has met Tigerstar! When he was an apprentice, he told Tigerstar he would never follow him.
On page 299, when Brambleclaw strikes at Hawkfrost, Hawkfrost says: "Fool!Do you think I did this alone? Do you think you're safe within your own clan? Think again!" But Brambleclaw refers to it as: "What?What do you mean?Tell me, Hawkfrost! Who do you mean?" So, we don't know if Hawkfrost planned this plot with a Thunderclan warrior, or with Tigerstar.
On page 269 Squrrelflight laughs at Brambleclaw because she says he already appointed Ferncloud for a hunting patrol, so she can't go on the Dawn patrol, but on pages 268-267 Brambleclaw appointed Sandstorm for a hunting patrol, and told her to pick two others
The Sight:
The 3 cats who first sent Leafpool the prophecy for Power of Three were Lionheart, Bluestar, and Yellowfang. Now, think about this, Jaypaw is a lot like Yellowfang, (Grumpy) Hollypaw is a lot like Bluestar (Bossy) and Lionpaw is a lot like Lionheart (mister perfect) Just an intresting fact.
They gave us the reasons for Rainwhisker and Molekit's deaths, but there was none for poor old Goldenflower.....I assume she died of old age, but it would have been nice if they metioned her.
Leafpool lied (Or forgot) when she told Jaypaw she had only visited 1 cats dream before, willowpaw, what about Brambleclaw's dream.
On page 325 of the Sight, it calls Firestar, FIRESTORM! lol This was noticed by some visitors to the site. Thanks
At the end of the Sight, in the preview of Dark River, it calls Mousepaw MouseFUR! I think that the writers were used to just writing Mousefur, from earlier in the series.(and they fixed this in the book, Dark River)
Did you notice that Ashfur is now like brambleclaw's friend? He supports him and it even made it seem he lied about Hawkfrost for him.
Littlecloud, the ShadowClan medicine cat, had a 'sign' that Warriors brought strange new prey to camp, a bird he had never seen before. Think about this, Jaypaw. A bird. Maybe Jaypaw will be important to ShadowClan some how.
Heavystep, the Elder that died in TNP, is still alive! he is still an elder, even in Dark river too. Whoops In the sight Hollypaw and Lionpaw got to go to the gathering. BUT they had only been apprentices for a half moon. And it says that apprentices DON"T usally get to go unless they did someting special
"Brightheart stiffend. 'No cat has said that you're useless. And Longtail wont thank you for being so rude about him!' She stepped back from JayPAW and lifted her chin. 'I've asked him to help with some of your training.' He wasn't Jaypaw, yet, he was still Jaykit
In Twilight and Sunset Reedwhisker is Ripplepaws mentor and when Leafpool goes to help Mothwing with the sick cats she meets the pair and Reedwhisker said that Ripplepaw was a She-cat then in the Sight Ripplepaw becomes Rippletail but it says that Rippletail it a male
On Page 275-276 where Jaypaw is at the moon pool.Jaypaw says he couldn't tell Her (meaning Leafpool) about ONESTAR'S warning to Barkface. Onestar didn't give Backface the warning it was Tallstar.
Berrypaw says that if he hasn't slapped his TAIL over Mousepaw's mouth, Mousepaw would've blurted out that Firestar was going to give part of his territory away to ShadowClan. Berrypaw has no tail, it's just a stump
On page 318 it says Leafpool has gone to WindClan to ask for catmint. WindClan came to ThunderClan to ask for catmint and then Leafpool when to RiverClan to ask for catmint
On page 238 Hollypaw is going through the thorn barrier and almost runs into Graystripe, Sandstorm and Honeypaw but on page 240 she gose to talk to Firestar and Sandstorm is grooming his ear
Dark River:
I SO don't trust Heatherpaw! first, she seems to flirt with Jaypaw a litle and now Lionpaw. She also is the one who keeps luring him out to break the rules. Also, I find it a little odd she names their play Clan, DarkClan. AND gives Lionpaw the name of LionCLAW as in TIGERCLAW. Lionpaw has a dream about a fox, then later he sneaks out with Heatherpaw and she says, "don't worry, there are no foxes" hmmmmmm. Erin Hunter did promise there would be a she-cat villian........
I had a disturbing thought about Heatherpaw..........Tabby with Blue eyes.......who does that sound like? HAWKFROST! I know, this is a huge jump. but it could happen, I mean you never know when more of Tigestar's kids are going to show up!
Tawnypelt had kits, Dawnkit, Flamekit and Tigerkit. Wouldn't Tigerstar be intrested in them? I mean, he is always trying to get his kids to join him, I think he would try to get them as well.
Tawnypelt kits names, Tigerkit (after her father) Flamekit(possible after Firestar) and Dawnkit(maybe after the ShadowClan leader in Firestar's quest,
Was Erin Hunter obessed with foxes in this book, or was that suppose to be some sort of sign to the reader? Lionpaw even had a dream aabout Foxes! The cats of old, that used to live around the lake and that used the tunnel, are most likely the same cats that used the Moonpool.
I find it strange, Sharpclaw was the name that the rouge Scratch joined Skyclan under, and now it's whatever these cats of old called their warriors. Rock, the cat from the old cats that used to live around the lake, was blind, and Jaypaw is the one who found the 'stick', and he is blind. I wonder if Rock was the one who called him there, maybe only Blind cats can read it......or something
Did you notice about Berrypaw? He has been training for like 8 1/2 moons! and so have his siblings, so it's not that he just fell behind or something. on page 206 it says Jaypaw hadn't SEEN Hollypaw since this morning. Jaypaw's blind!
on page 263 the books says "Jaypaw felt Firestar's AMBER gaze warm his fur." Firestar's eyes are emerald green!
When cinderpaw falls out of the sky oak spiderleg is with her but when hollypaw gets leafpool leafpool says "who's with her?" hollypaw repliys " brackenfur, cloudtail, mousepaw and ASHFUR!" ashfur wasn't there! and hollypaw didn't mention that spiderleg was there!
and, when Leafpool gets there, Ashfur is there and no Spiderleg!
When Jaypaw is attending his fist gathering he and he gets called over by Leafpool, Leafpool is sitting next to Barkface and Mothwing.The only problem: Mothwing wasn't there yet, none of RiverClan was. They show up a little bit later.
On page 226 it says "Heatherpaw pushed her nuzzle." I think it should be muzzle
On page 129, on the way to the gathering, it says Hollypaw ducks between Squirrelflight and Brackenfur, but then it says Squirrelflight, Brambleclaw, Dustpelt, Mousepaw and Spiderleg walk ahead, but Squirrelflight is still beside Hollypaw! Squirrelflight can't be in two places at once
On page 39 it says Cinderpaw was stopping Poppypaw from answering any more awkward questions about Lionpaw, but Poppypaw was actually the one asking the awkward questions, so it should've been Cinderpaw stopping Poppypaw from ASKING any more awkward questions
On Page 206, It said MOUSEFUR! AKA, Mousepaw. It was when they where discussing that Hollypaw hadn't showed up from training. Mousepaw was saying,"Brackenfur figured she'd been kept in camp for some reason," MouseFUR added.
On page 264, Dark River, warriors, It said Firestar was giving his last orders to his escorts, Brambleclaw and Dusltpelt. His name is DUSTPELT
Outcast:
Brook tells Hollypaw she has 'strong back legs' and that she would be able to catch prey in the mountains. SkyClan cats have strong legs and their specialty is jumping.
Spiderleg and Daisy? Spiderleg is a hypocrite, he complains about kitty pets but he will mate with one
On Page 94, Eventually the gray cat raised his tail for silence. "We will hear what Stormfur has to say." He announced. "Thank you, Stonetellar" Stormfur dipped his head. Stonetellar is a brown tabby cat, not a gray cat
I don't think it was Tigerstar or Hawkfrost Lionpaw was hearing in the battle, I believe that is his special power, he may be able to predict what to do in battle
Jaypaw's paws fit into the paw prints at the Moonpool, I believe he is related to the cats of the old tribe, perhaps one of the characters now is a distant tribe cat.
The cat in SOTC that talked about the Moonpool may have Rock, but that cat seemed too nice and gave straight answers, so again, maybe not What was the point of giving us Twist's name in the Allegiances but never mentioning it in the book?
How did Hollypaw know the story about Squirrelpaw in the fence? It was told to Lionpaw, and he never told her about it
It was pretty mean of Firestar to promise Brightheart she would get to mentor Icekit (in the sight) and then instead give it to her daughter
In the Allegiances Crag is listed as Brook's brother, but on page 107, Talon says that he is her sister!
On page 36 in the book outcast, paragraph one, right after Foxpaw is apprenticed it calls Foxpaw, Foxkit after he was named Foxpaw
On page 104 it saya "...Jaypaw could picture him now,strong and sleek-furred with anger smoldering in his blue eyes", Stormfur has AMBER eyes, not blue!
Chapter 28 page 306 it said that Lionpaw saw Squirrelflight leaping after an intruder. Why was Squirrelflight there? She was supposed to be in the tribe cave with Jaypaw to guard the left tribe cats! Don't tell me she just felt that a battle was happening and found her way all the way there?
In the preview for Eclipse that Firestar says, "they're back!"when the apprentices return from hunting, and "Let's see what they've caught!" Firestar wasn't even there at the time! Luckily, they changed it to Tawnypelt before the actual book came out (Thanks Raintalon)
Eclipse
On Page 166, Firestar interduces his clan to Sol, inculding Sandstorm. Then, a page alter, it says that Sandstorm and Squirrelflight returned from hunting. She can't be in 2 places at once
On Page 231, Hollypaw refers to Briarkit as "he" even though it is a She-Cat
Shouldn't Leafpool had known Squirrelflight was wounded? They have that bond between them where they can feel each other
On page 317, Mousefur says to Millie, " Don't worry, ill make sure Rosekit and Toadkit dont trample him." She is talking about Briarkit, who is a she-cat
The second time Lionpaw visits Tigerstar in his dream Lionpaw says, What do I do? and then it is written FIRESTAR told him
When ever one of the Clan cat discribe Sol, they say he is toroiseshell and white, but in the allegiances, he is a toroiseshell and brown.
Hollypaw,Lionpaw,and Cinderpaw are being made warriors, they get their names, but why do they get to become warriors BEFORE they do the warrior assessment?
On page 87 Sorreltail wishes for Molekit to be with his sisters at the warrior ceremony, but on page 7 of the Sight it said he was MolePAW.
On page 105, it states,'Hawkfrost was already sitting in the needle-strewn hollow, his amber eyes glowing in the half-light.'His eyes are icy blue,not amber
On page 93, it says they left theough the gorse tunnel, but that was in the old camp. The new camp has a thorn barrier.
Long Shadows:
It is possible that not only did the cats around the lake create the Tribe of Rushing Water, they might have been some of the first clan cats, the mountains aren't any further from the lake then they are from the old forest so it is a possibility.
The 'Casting of Stones' was the same as when the Tribe had to decide to go or fight in Outcast. Very nice tie-in.
His name was Stone Song, which is probably where they got the title, Stoneteller.
Her name was Half Moon, the time when medicine cats go to the Moonpool/Moonstone. And she was in love with a medicine cat, very clever.
The ancient cats left Rock behind! No one went to tell him they were leaving or good bye or anything, they just left him down in the tunnels, how rude.
It is possible that none of the three cats are related, Jayfeather might be Jay's wing, like Cinderheart is Cinderpelt, and the other two, who knows. Also, the 'three' might still be coming, new cats that haven't appeared yet.
On page 65, Jaypaw meets Raggedstar and Runningnose and makes a comment about how he doesn't know them and then about Runningnose's cold. However, he had already seen Runingnose in Eclipse when he walked it Littlecloud's dream. So he should have known who is was.
On page 76, Hollyleaf calls to Flame'paw', but this book only takes place a few days after Eclipse, in which case Flame was still a 'kit' so how did she know he had been apprenticed?
On page 248, Lionblaze didn't known Heatherpaw's warrior name but earlier knew Breezepaws, they are the same age so if he knew one, he should have known both. And again, how did they know their names when only a few days had passed between books?
On page 92 they have "ShadowClan" insted of "StarClan" Heres the part: "We have to do what Jaypaw suggested, and make a fake sign from ShadowClan. And we have to do it soon! I'll do anything to remind ShadowClan cats of their warrior ancestors."
On page 232 to 236, Lionblaze hears Spiderleg coughing in the warriors den,so take him to Leafpool.On their way,Daisy,Spiderleg's mate,is worried about Spiderleg's health,so in the medicine cats den she offers him a vole,but Spiderleg won't eat it.Then,him and Daisy have a fight.Suddenly Daisy leaves.But why is Leafpool all of a sudden saying stuff like "Kits are very precious gifts." or "You are punishing the kits by not being a better father." or even "`You've seen Brambleclaw and Graystripe and Dustpelt around their kits.I can't believe you don't see how important this is!You should cherish your kits with every breath you take." Is it me,or is Leafpool acting a little bit TOO motherly.
On page 161, Lionblaze said he saw Heatherpaw's gray fur, but she is light ginger
On page 124 of Long Shadows, after the 3 & Tawny's kits make the fake sign from StarClan, they are about to go back to their Clans when it says-(quote) "What are we going to do about out mother?" Dawnpaw asked her brother and SISTER. Dawnpaw doesn't have a sister!
On page 225, it calls Stone Song, Stone Shadow
On page 17 Its says the following, "Hazeltail launched HIMSELF onto the apprentice, trying to thrust his way towards Birchfall." In the allegiances Hazeltail is a she-cat and I do believe she is a she-cat don't you?
In Eclipse it clearly states that blossomkit (Graystripe's kit) is tortishell, but in the alligences for Long Shadows it says she's a light brown she-cat with a dark stripe along her back.
Sunrise
Whitewing isn't listed under Queens in the front back for the whole book is in the nursery.
I have a hard time believing that with his miss placed curiousity that Jayfeather didn't try to find Ashfur in StarClan and ask who killed him. I know he didn't like Ashfur, but it still seems like something Jayfeather would do.
There was no body of Hollyleaf, anyone else think she will be back?! I do, I think she will be a villian later, it would make for a good story.
I think Dovekit will be the cat chosen. Not only will we have all animal names, (Jay, Lion, Dove,) but also Jay's Wing and Dove's Wing were ancient cats who were brother and sister, it's very nice that they now have Jayfeather and Dovekit who are related.
On page 29, it says that Ashfoot shrugged. When was the last time you saw your cat shrug? Cats don't shrug, in fact, they can't because they have no collarbone! I also spotted this throughout the book but stopped writing down who and on what page.
On page 32, Cloudtail, in all his wisdom, says this: Maybe Sol caught Ashfur unawares," Unwares?
On page 49, it refers to Ashfoot as Ashfur.
On page 225, first paragraph, they call Tornear TURNear
In the allegiances Sol has tabby and white fur while in the book he is a tortoiseshell-and-white
On page 64 Brambleclaw says, 'run like a tribe of badgers is after you.' I thought it was set of badgers
On page 122 They called Brackenfur ginger again! He's golden-brown
On page 179 When Hollyleaf is counting all the sleeping cats, it doesn't not mention Lionblaze.
On page 308, when Hollyleaf is talking to Cinderheart, it says that "The wisdom in her (Cinderheart's) voice seemed to come from a much older and more experienced cat." I think that "more experienced cat" is Cinderpelt.
On Page 183 when Hollyleaf asks Brambleclaw if there's time to hunt, she says "Do we have we time to hunt?" she asked Brambleclaw. I think it should say "Do we have time to hunt" instead
On page 72 It says, "The wind hit HollyPAW in the face." when in fact she is a warrior at this point!
On page 168 it says in the 6th paragraph: Purdy instructed. "They'll flatten you as soon as look at you..." Shouldn't it be they'll flatten you as you as THEY look at you?
The Fourth Apprentice:
ON Page 3 it says that Yellowfang shrugged. Don't even get me started on this again! Cats don't and can't shrug. They have no collarbones. Also throughout the entire book, but I'm not posting every page.
On Page 45 it says that Thornclaw 'dropped the stick again' However, if you read the page and the page before it, they never mention that he 'dropped' the stick at all, which means he couldn't have done it 'again'
They keep mentioning the underground tunnels, maybe trying to elude to Hollyleaf being alive?
They never explain what happened to the kittypets after the dam was destroyed. The Clan cats didn't even say good-bye I guess, how rude.
The attack on Jayfeather by Breezepelt is rather dumb when you think about it. Poppyfrost and Jayfeather fail to report the attack to ANYONE in the Clan, when they could do so, then talk to Onestar. I think everyone would believe them because Poppyfrost has no reason to lie and Jayfeather, half-clan or not, is still a medicine cat. But, every problem in the Warriors series could be sloved if they would tell the truth from the beginning. I guess that's the 'moral' of the story. But this still bothered me in the book that they said NOTHING.
On page 288, it says "I don't suppose any of us will mind getting our paws wet in future" It's supposed to say, "in the future"
Fading Echoes
List in the allegiances it says 'Bumbleflight' when in fact his warrior name is BumbleSTRIPE
On page 91 it says, 'Thornclaw and Lionblaze squared up beside Lionblaze...' Wow! Now he can be two places at once?! This mistake should have been caguht by the editor, there is no excuse, although it is funny.
On page 245 Dovepaw says, "Say hi to Tigerheart from me!" Shouldn't it be "Say hi to Tigerheart FOR me'? I suppose it could work both ways, but I've never heard anyone say that before.
On page 288 it calls Starlingpaw 'she' when in fact Starlingpaw is a ginger TOM.
Pinepaw is mentioned to be sick when Firestar, Brambleclaw and Jayfeather visit the ShadowClan camp. However, a little later at the battle, Pinepaw is there fighting. Why would ShadowClan send a sick apprentice to a battle when they have prefectly good Warriors.
The very last page of the book the typefont changes on the word 'deaths'. It's fairly noticeable and is probably the publishers fault more then the writer. It's still amusing, however.
On page 187 it calls Blossomfall BlossomPAW after she is made a warrior
On one of the pages it says: "Dovepaw's blue eyes flashed." This is confusing, on the cover of 'The Fourth Apprentice' she has green eyes, in the actual book she has amber, now blue?
Chapters 23 and 24 have the same picture as teh header, which is odd.
Night Whispers On page 4 it says; "Mudfur, the old WindClan medicine cat..." however, Mudfur wasn't the WindClan medicine cat, he was teh RiverClan medicine cat!
On page 8 it says; "Hazeltail glanced at him with scorn in her eyes and pressed closer to Mousewhisker, lapping at her sister's bleeding ruffled fur." But Mousewhisker is a Tom! He is related to Hazeltail, but it's not her sister.
Firestar's Quest:
In it allegiances it lists all the ShadowClan warriors under "apprentices"!
At the end of Darkest hour, Bluestar says, "No Firestar, you are wrong, there have never been four clans, there have always been five" Was she talking of SkyClan, or StarClan?
On page 443, it calls Petal Petalnose before she gets her Warrior name! Editor must have missed that one too
Firestar is thinking about the rat battle and is worried about the SkyClan cats and he thinks to himself (not quoted prefectly,) "They only have 1 life to lose, I have 6, I have to fight harder" ............I guess Firestar, as great as he is, can't do math. He has 8 lives left, he lost 1 in Darkest hour, and after he says this he loses 1 more, and then he loses 1 on the way to the lake, a tree falls on him. that means, as far as we know, he has 6 lives left by the Power of Three: the Sight.
If Spottedleaf and Tigerclaw were of SkyClan blood, that means that Brambleclaw, Mothwing, Hawkfrost and Tawnypelt, are also of SkyClan blood, which means, that SkyClan really does still live on in the four clans. (And it's funny to about Tigerstar, knowing how he feels about 'half-clan' cats lol) Spottedleaf seems to be more powerful then the rest of StarClan, I wonder if why she is able to walk in the dark forest, where Tigerstar is, is because she has some family ties with him
Jaypaw, Hollypaw and Lionpaw all have SkyClan blood as well, I think this must be part of the Mystery in The Power of Three. Maybe thats why they have their 'powers' and why it was Skywatcher who gave the prophcey to Firestar.
They say that Firestar and Sandstorm gave Leafkit her name in memory of Leafdapple and Spottedleaf, I think Squirrelkit gets the second part of her warrior name (Flight) After Birdflight, the Mate of Cloudstar.
On page 17, paragraph 3, it says, "Thornclaw was emerging from the gorse tunnel WITH HIS APPRENTICE, SOOTPAW" Thornclaw didn't have an apprentice yet! On page 105, paragraphs 1-7, Firestar talks to Longtail about changing Sootpaw's mentor (Longtail) to Thornclaw, due to (Longtail's) condition. Also, on the Allegiances section, under current day ThunderClan, Longtail didn't have an apprentice, but Thornclaw did. It kind of spoiled the book a little.
At the end of Firestar's quest, where Firestar's with Squirrelkit and Leafkit, it says that Whitewing would be apprenticed soon (meaning that she was six moons old). Then moons pass. Squirrelkit and Leafkit get apprenticed. Then Squirrelpaw goes on the journy with Brambleclaw and everyone. Whitewing is still an apprentice. Squirrelpaw and Brambleclaw return. They take the Clans to the forest, and Squirrelpaw becomes a warrior. But Whitewing is still an apprentice, and is for two or three books afterword. She was six moons older than Squirrelpaw. She would have been at least 18 moons old by the times she became a warrior
On page 86, Smudge says, "Sometimes I think my TWOLEGS are stupid. I asked and asked to come out, but would they open the door?" Kittypets don't say Twolegs, they say Housefolk
Bluestar's Prophecy
On page 48, it mentions that Speckletail kitted, but she wasn't in the nursery eariler in the story. I suppose the time frame fits, but just barely.
On page 48 Bluekit sents Wildflight, Adderfang and Sparrowpelt. Later, when she meets up with them, Thrushpelt is also on the patrol. I find it hard to believe Bluekit can seprate all her clanmates scents BUT Thrushpelt.
On page 107 it mentions Bluepaw's pray as being a mouse and Snowpaw's prey being a shrew. But flip back to page 103 and you'll see that Bluepaw had chosen a Sparrow and Snowpaw has a mouse! This is one of my favorite errors as of late, mostly becaus eit's big and funny.
On page 349 it says "...they've got another think coming." It should be the word THING rather then THINK. Although I am guilty of typing that tmistake too, the editor should have caught this.
On page 479 there is a space missing between a word and a coma, "I know,little one." It's a bit hard to catch, but if you look you will see it.
Chapter 44 had confusing time frames, it starts mention that Bluestar is sitting in newleaf sun. Then the next page says that newleaf has finally arrived...a moon later. I think they meant to make the time be many moons aprat, but it didn't come across that way.
In one field guide, Bluestar mentions she didn't know that Fireheart was the fire in the prophecy, not even when she saw the sunlight hit his pelt in the camp when he first came. Yet, in BP she knew it from before he even ventured into the forest.
I have hard time believing that RiverClan and ThunderClan never put together the missing kits. It seems to me that ThunderClan would have annouced at the gathering that they lost kits, and RiverClan would annouce they found kits. NO ONE questioned this? Especially when the kits got named in RiverClan and had the names Bluestar had given them? The whole thing just seems fishy...no pun intended.
Did anyone else find a few of the pairings...disturbing? I mean, Pinestar is on his last life and choose Leopardfoot as a mate when she was only an apprentice when the book started. That's just not right. Thrushpelt, as much as I liked him, was too old for Bluestar too. And countless others throughout the book that I couldn't even list them all. I don't mind a few moons older or younger, but some are just too much.
On page 23 when Bluekit & Snowkit are visiting the elders, it says that Featherwhisker glanced at Bluekit & LEOPARDKIT. Leopardkit & Patchkit were being shown the ravine by Dapplepaw. SNOWKIT was with Bluekit.
On page 96 “Adderfang and STORMFUR, sharing a thrush beneath Highrock, swung their broad heads to stare at Goosefeather.” It should, of course, be StormTAIL
On page 55 White-Eye and the shrugging...and throughout the rest of the book.
On page 123 says Bluepaw hadnt even looked at her mother before the battle, but she walked with her mother to the WindClan camp
On page 129 it calls Hawkheart gray flecked, but in the alligneces, he is mottled brown
On page 272 it says Pinestar is breaking the warrior code by living like a kittypet, but thats not in the code until AFTER he became a kittypet
On page 297 it calls Shellheart, the riverclan deputy, a SHE but in the allagnces Shellheart is a HE
On page 347 it says its against the code to have friends in other clans, but in code of the clans, it says " You may have friends with cats in other clans, but your loyalty remains to your own clan"
For her whole life, Snowfur and her sister had the same ending to their names (kit,paw,fur)
Acording to Bluestar's prophecy, Rosekit/tail is a kit in the book, Speckletail is a Warrior, well in the orginal warriors series, RoseTail is an elder, and Speckletail is a warrior and dosent retire till a Dangerous Path, how is this possible? Shouldn't Speckletail be the oldest cat in thunderclan, not One-eye, since One-eye (then Whitepaw) was an apprentice at the beggining or the book.
On page 353, it says "Adderfang had come. Everything would be fine now. Dappletail was with him,and Windflight and Thrushpelt." then a few paragraphs later, it say "She felt White-eye's tail drape her shoulders." how is White-eye there suddenly, and the rest of the time, Dappletail isn't?
In the end, page 506 to be more specific, while Bluestar is talking to Redtail, she says that she "had led four good lives" but then says to herself that she has actually lost seven and only has two left. This can't be possible, because after Firestar joins Thunderclan, she loses three lives. One in Into the Wild fighting the rats, one in Fire and Ice to greencough, and one in A Dangerous Path when she nearly drowned saving Fireheart.
SkyClan's Destiny
Under the Allegiances it lists Bouncefire and Tinycloud as Clovertail's son and dauther, and yet it doesn't list that under Rockshade, evne though he is also their sibling.
Under the Allegiances it lists Fallowfern's mate and the father of her kits as "Hunchfoot". However, we learn in the book that it's actually Waspwhisker. What's worse is that there isn't even a character named "Hunchfoot" in the whole book!
What was the point of listing Rose, Bella, Lily, Oscar and Nutmeg? Yes, some of them appeared as random cats in the battle, but they weren't named, therefor they don't need to be listed under the Allegiances.
Weren't the previous Warriors books always saying that after six moons kittypets went to the "cutter"? Why. then, are ALL the Daylight-Warriors non-fixed? I suppose some humans don't fix their cats, but for the most part, people do to prevent spraying in the house and bredding for females. I have a hard time believing that ALL the Daylight-Warriors are fine.
On page 84 they make say something along the lines of "Shorty shrugged" well, you KNOW how much this always annoys me since cats can't shrug because they have no collarbones. I'm not going to list every page they say "Shrug" but rest assured that it appears many more times beyond this one.
On page 124, when Stick is explaining the plan, it gets confusing at one part as to who is talking; ""Okay, pretend this is the rubbish heap." Sharpclaw pulled out several clawfuls of moss and bracken from Leafstar's nest and piled it up in the middle of the den. "The rats are in..."" Do you see how they don't remind us STICK is talking and SHARPCLAW only moved things? It's confusing when reading fast, because it seems like Sharpclaw is talking.
The Lost Warrior
It says, "Right Off the bat Millie's great" It's a baseball term! How would a cat know that?
Warriors Refudge:
When Graystripe is trying to get the little twoleg away from the pond, he mentions "their daughter" How would Graystripe, a cat, know what gender a human was?
Warriors Return:
On the second to last page it shows something strange. It is clear that Leopardstar, Firestar, and Blackstar are there but the forth leader, supposedly Onestar, looks awfully close to Tallstar, but he died in Starlight.
In the sight Squirrelflight pointed out to the clans that Graystripe brought someone {millie} with him, but in warriors return, it said that Graystripe introduced Millie when he didn't
Into the Woods (Tigerstar and Sasha):
On page 78 at the bottom Tigerstar says: I have a plan to lure a pack of dogs into their (Thunderclan's) camp. Then we'll be rid of that filthy kittypet Firestar and his clan of kittypets and halfbreeds once and for all. Firestar wasn't leader when Tigerstar was doing things with the dogs and there were hardly and kityypets then just Cloudtail and Fireheart well Graystripe had a forbidden love previously too.
Near the end of the book when Tigerstar asks Sasha to join ShadowClan, Sasha asks if she could think about it. Tigerstar says he'll go by her den TOMORROW NIGHT. Sasha goes back and finds Pine, an early friend hacking and wheezing. Sasha didn't want to end up like Pine, so she hurried to ShadowClan. She overhears Tigerstar and his plots to rule the forest. Sasha is terrified and runs back. When she arrives, Tigerstar soon appears, asking if she wanted to join ShadowClan. I sure don't think running, overhearing Tigerstar and arriving back didn't take a day did it?
Secrets of the Clans:
In the first series, it said that Bluestar only mentored Deputy's kids, in SOTC, it says she mentored Frostpaw, (Frostfur) and Runningpaw (Runningwind). Does that mean that they are Redtail's kits?
On Page 120, it calls Sharptooth SHARPCLAW! I guess whoever edited just missed it.
On page 64, it says that Tigerstar was killed by BLOOD, leader of BloodClan.....I think they meant Scourge. whoops! this was noticed by some visitors to my site, Thank you!
On page 105 of "Secrets of the Clans" under Redtail it says(quote), "Firestar ever met Bluestar's first deputy, but he worked...." Ever should be never!
Under Crookedstar's deputies it only says Leopardfur, but Oakheart was the first deptuy before her
In the Warrior Code, and there is nothing about Medicine cats having kits!
Cats of the Clans:
On Page 4, Rocks says, "I envied them their skills." what kind of grammar is that? it would be fine if there was a coma even, but there isn't
On Ashfur's profile, the last line says, "he has a story of his own" Implying that he still has somethign to do int eh books, maybe a hint he is or isn't the traitor.
On Crowfeather's page, It says, "I wonder if StarClan had forgotten about him compeletly. Or perphaps they were punishing him for some misdeed he hasn't yet done?" This implies to me that Crowfeatehr still hasn't done everythign bad he is going too. Maybe a future story?
On Cloudstar and Skywatcher's page, it says that Skywatcher was the last decendant of SkyClan, but that isn't true as Cherrypaw, Leafdapple, Sparrowpaw and more all were. And on the very next page in COTC, it says that Leafdapple was a decendant, they can't get is straight!
Did anyone else find it stupid that Talon got a picture but Brook didn't I thought it was Brook until I read the plate under it that read Talon of Swooping Eagle
The pic of Graypool, Mistyfoot and Stonefur is incorrect because Stone and Misty were both supposed to have blue eyes.
To me it seems like the authors are implying that Brambleclaw really is evil and that the whole thing in Sunset was a setup (we don't know Brambleclaw's thoughts anymore after that, so how would we know?) and that Ashfur is really the good guy.
In the illustration of Graystripe, he has green eyes, not amber.
Brightheart has an amber eye, not a green eye.
Rock said he could see the kits tingle or jump, but he can't he's blind!
They said Leafdapple(Leafstar) was a kittypet before she joined SkyClan, She was a rouge
It shows crowfeather with AMBER eyes Crowfeather has BLUE eyes.
On Heatherpaws page, it says 7 lives were nearly lost that night, weren't there 8 cats? The three ThunderClan cats Jaypaw, Lionpaw, and Hollypaw, 2 WindClan apprentices, Heatherpaw and Breezepaw, and the 3 kits.
According to Rock, Crookedstar accepted Mistykit and Stonekit into RiverClan because it might give Bluestar (then BlueFUR) second thoughts about attacking "the Clan across the river". But Bluefur wasn't leader yet! She wasn't even deputy! And Crookedstar would think (if anything) that she COULDN'T be deputy because of her kits! And since when do normal warriors give the order to attack?
Code of the Clans:
Throughout the whole book, Clan leaders kept interrupting signs from StarClan without consulting their medicine cats, something that is usually frowned upon.
Rosetail is mentioned, her mother an elder, dies. This is around the same time as Darkstripe and Longtail being warriors, due to the content of that section. However, in Book 1, into the wild, Rosetail is already an elder. Either her mother was super old and so was she, or the timeline is a little messy.
On Page 65, another cat does the impossible-shrugs. If you didn't know from early posts, cats lack collar bones and so can't shrug.
Squirrelflight says she did her warriors vigil in the old forest. However, she was made a warrior in the lake camp.
Mothpelt referred to his father as "Father" when all other cats in every other book call their parents by their names.
On Page 98 says "Thunder and Lightning that shook the forest to it's roots." Similar to the Prophecy in the 2nd series.
On Page 109 Whitestorm calls Graypaw "Graystripe" even though it was already said he was GrayPAW. Maybe he had a vision of the future!
On page 42, it says,"Darkstripe was peering at Longstripe as if he could read his thoughts." It's supposed to be Longtail, Not Longstripe.
On page 40, it says Longtail shrugged. Again, Cats can't shrug
On page 107, Poppycloud is Mottlepaw's mentor and mother. But in Firestar's Quest it mentions that mothers can't mentor their own kits due to the pact that they'd be too soft on them
In "Hunting Fish!" it says about White-eye, "...her ears looked huge against her head but HIS eyes shone as she..." (Thanks Rainpath)
Battles of the Clans
On page 103, it states that the cat attacks a another cat and 'remembers her from the gathering, Whitetail'. or something along those lines. However, Whitetail is a WindClan cat, and no where in this section is WindClan mentioned, meaning that they added her to an incorrect Clan.
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Fan fact!
Ravenpaw, Graypaw and Firepaw were best friends. Firepaw had an orenge pelt, Graypaw has a gray pelt and Ravenpaw has a black pelt. Lionpaw has and orangeish pelt, Jaypaw has a gray pelt and Hollypaw has a black pelt
But think about this......
Firestar and Graystripe are still around while Ravenpaw left the clans(Because of Tigerstar)
Lionblaze and Jayfeather are still around while Hollyleaf left the clans(Died in tunnel)
So the cats with orangish and gray pelts are still around while the cats with black pelts are gone
Fun fact!
In "The Darkest Hour" on page 297, it says Bramblepaw, Tawnypaw, Stormpaw, and Featherpaw were all fighting together against Bone. Well, that's everybody accept for Crowpaw who went to the Sun-drown place.(Crowpaw would be a kit then anyways)
looking around Squirrelpaw realized that all the cats from the sun-drown-place were beside her - Brambleclaw, Stormfur, Crowpaw, and Tawnypaw even though tawntpelt was a warrior like 2 books before this one and they did it again on page 179 the first sentence again tawnypaw is wrong
You know how Stormkit and Featherkit were nursed by a Thunderclan queen.That queen was Goldenflower, and she had Bramblekit and Tawnykit then, nursing with Stormkit and Featherkit.Then later Brambleclaw and Stormfur become best friends, which is cool.
the dead rabbit in the pool where mothwing used the water from as a sign from starclan. when firestar was made deputy late, to punish bluestar they made her fresh-kill turn into crowfood. just before the dead rabbit, onewhisker was made deputy the wrong way so the crowfood could just be the punishm
Fun Fact
It says in one of the earlier books (I think Into the Wild) that all the apprentices must make a journey to the moonstone before they are made warriors, but after Firepaw Graypaw go, it's not mentioned again I must add on to the one above, it seems from the Preview of OUTCAST (next book in Power of Three) that they mention the fact Apprentices don't travel anymore, I wonder if Erin Hunter heard the fans on this one!
When ThunderClan and RiverClan were helping the ShadowClan cats escape their camp (because the Twoleg monsters were attacking it), Squirrelflight helped a tortiseshell queen with two kits get out (specifically NOT Tallpoppy). The name of this queen was never told, and she was never mentioned again. Also, Tallpoppy is the only queen listed in the Allegiances
this is kinda a prediction, When Leafpaw gets aptured by 2legs, and meets this cat named Coal, next to the cage with Cody, the one that she helps, I think thats the same cat in Firestar's Quest. The one that always brags alot. I think thats the same cat that is in the cage with Cody and Leafpaw.
Smudge's garden looks out into the "destroyed forest" which means that if u were standing on the border of skyclan and thunderclan u would be able to see the camp, right? If that is true then why did Redstar say that his patrols scented more patrols on skyclan's territory when they could see the camp from their side of the border. think about that
Firestar and Bluestar have lost lives. We all know that. But did you notice the similarities between them?
Buestar lost one live because of rats.(Into the Wild) Firestar lost a life because of rats. (Firestar's Quest) Bluestar lost a life to greencough. (Fire and Ice. I think) Firestar lost a life to greencough. (Long Shadows) We don't know how Bluestar lost the other 6 lives.
I happened to remember something from the Code of the Clans book. In the story about how the code about always helping kits in trouble was made, it says at the end that the kits that had died had suddenly become adults once they reached Starclan. While that would make sense, it is stated in one of the books in the New Prophecy Quest series (not sure which one) that cats that died stayed in the form that they had died in once they reached Starclan. Therefore kits would stay kits. It uses an example with Holykit and Lark(?)kit to show this.
Also, Mistystar brought up a good point because both Bluestar and Tallstar are younger in POT in StarClan.
Willowpelt died from a bager by protecting her son Sootfur. (Sootpaw at the time). But then Sootfur died from a bager too! Just an interesting fact.
Mistyfoot was a senior warrior when Rusty joined the Clan. Mousefur was just turned into a warrior. Now Mousefur has been an elder for more than a series and Mistyfoot is going to get nine lives in Fading Echoes? She is old.
Pinestars living decendents are everywhere except windclan. they are Tawnypelt and her 3 kits in shadowclan, mothwing in riverclan, and brambleclaw in thunderclan. (this is because leopardfoot was pinestars mate, and tigerclaw was her son, making brambleclaw and tawnypelt her grandchildren{grandkits?} and tawnypelts kits her great grandchildren{kits?}
Ever notice how White-Eye/One-Eye is the only one with a hyphion? At first i thought it was because of the 2 "E"'s next to eachother, but with names like blackkit, they dont hyphionate it at all, so why should it not be White-eye or One-eye?
Rownclaw:
ROWANCLAW changes genders! in midnight, it's a SHE and in the Starlight, it's a HE!
The joys of disappearing cats!
Boulder: Appears and Disappears randomly though the Allegiances
Hints That Leafpool and Crowfeather Are the Real Parents of Holly, Jay, and Lion from the Sight: (From Wildfire)
“Leafpool always thinks she can win us over just because she brings wool for our nests from the moorland,’ Jaykit hissed, “Or pieces of honeycomb to lick.”
Nothing’s troubling me,” Hollykit answered at once. “But I have something important to ask you.”
A look close to alarm flashed momentarily across Leafpool’s gaze. “What?”
She stopped midsentence, then meowed gently, “Being a medicine cat is a big commitment. You will rarely fight in battles or go on patrol. You won’t be able to take a mate, or have kits.” Hollykit saw her eyes darken with sadness. Was that regret she saw in their amber depths?
“I will teach her everything I know,” Leafpool promised. She touched Hollypaw’s muzzle with hers, but she didn’t meet Hollypaw’s eyes; instead, she looked past her, her expression clouded.
Surprised, Hollypaw turned and saw that Leafpool was looking at Squirrelflight. She wondered why there was sadness in both cats’ eyes.
Jaypaw bowed his head, his pelt burning with embarrassment. To make it worse, he could tell Squirrelflight was feeling an awkwardness that strengthened as Crowfeather went on. “Do your kits always go out by themselves?”
She tensed suddenly, jerking her head to stare at Crowfeather as he pushed his way through the brambles. Jaypaw’s fur pricked as tension set the air crackling like lightening in greenleaf.
“Hello, Crowfeather,” Leafpool meowed. She sounded as though she had a burr caught in her throat.
“Leafpool.” Crowfeather’s greeting was curt, but for the first time Jaypaw sensed some feeling other irritation stir beneath the Windclan warrior’s pelt. “I was out with Breezepaw and his mentor when we found him.”
Leafpool stiffened. “Your son’s an apprentice already?” Her mew was brittle.
“He is,” Crowfeather replied, his voice strangely flat.
He was still vaguely aware of the piercing emotion that raced between Crowfeather and Leafpool, but even that slid away as he slipped into the comforting stillness of sleep.
A faint memory stirred of a long, snowy journey, where his mother’s voice had comforted him and two soft pelts had urged him on.
“It takes some cats longer to see past their weaknesses clearly enough to appreciate their strengths,” Leafpool meowed, “And until they do, they feel every hurt like a tongue on raw flesh.”
Jaypaw felt that Leafpool was urging him to understand more than Brightheart’s anger, but he didn’t want to about it now.
“I would give my last drop of blood to save your kit,” Leafpool meowed softly to Crowfeather. “You know that.”
Jaypaw flinched at the tension between them, pricking the air like rain.
Our kit was lucky that Jaypaw was here.” Nightcloud’s comment was edged with sharpness.